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How to Make Your Editor Happy with Linda Formichelli’s Editors Unleashed – UPDATED

Posted on February 3, 2012 Written by Pinar Tarhan

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The Holly Query

Your relationship with an editor usually starts with the query letter. She might like it and decide to assign you to the topic, or she might just decide that it is horrible and send it to the bin. Given their importance, writing queries can be scary.

Writing queries used to freak me out. I can’t say I am now in love with the process of querying, but at least they don’t scare or overwhelm me anymore. I realized that the hardest part of writing a good query, at least to me, is finding that awesome angle that will fit the magazine readers’ needs and wants correctly while managing to describe this angle in a compelling way in your query. Of course even if you think you got it right, there is the possibility that topic was recently snatched by another writer, and you were a little late.

The Query Is Only the Beginning

But let’s assume that you do know how to send the right kind of query, and let’s assume that you got the job. Congratulations, you’ve got one foot in the door. But now that you started a relationship, you need to work on maintaining a good one by delivering quality work on time, written, styled and formatted according to the parameters you discussed with the editor. And after you come through, sending a second query to that editor will be easier. The editor himself can even call you and ask if you want another assignment.

So you need to do your homework well, send the impeccable query, and listen to the editor.

So far, so obvious, right?  I mean did you really need to be told to check your grammar or not attempt a query before knowing your way around the magazine, and its writer’s guidelines?

What Not To Do With and After The Query- Editors Unleashed

But  apparently some writers do, otherwise Linda Formichelli’s Editors Unleashed would not have needed to cover so much ground with the editor pet peeves.

In this entertaining and informative e-book, she has talked to several editors about how some writers infuriate them during and after query.

But the beauty of this book isn’t that they only share writer “horror” stories, but also the good stories where the writer got and completed the assignment with grace and continued to work with the editor.

There are lots of resources on how to write successful queries, and Linda Formichelli’s free packet of 10 query letters that got her assignments is one of them. It can be obtained by subscribing to her free newsletter.  Formichelli is a successful freelance writer and the co-author of the bestselling book The Renegade Writer. She blogs on The Renegade Writer.

Editors Unleashed used to cost $6.95, but now it is the second free gift for subscribing to  The Renegade Writer. This ultra-useful book  covers query dos and donts as well as what attitude editors expect from writer once the query lands them the job.

Reading this book will help you:

1)      To  get noticed by the editor and land that assignment

2)      To build and maintain a good, on-going relationship with the editor

3)      To build and maintain as a professional, reliable and easy-going writer

4)      To laugh. Seriously, some writer behavior will make you laugh.

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Some Editor Pet Peeves- Inspired by Editors Unleashed

–          Queries with grammar mistakes and/or typos

–          Queries  that show that the writer has no idea about the magazine’s target audience

–          Queries that are far too long or far too short

–          Queries that are vague

–          Generic queries that could be sent to any magazine and yet would appeal to none

–           Queries that have the magazine’s and/or the editor’s name wrong

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I’m sure there are more, but you get the point. While some of these are very obvious and takes a little effort on the writer’s part to get rid of them, getting the idea just right can be very tricky. To craft a query that is interesting, engaging and with a slant that hasn’t been done before is a challenge writers face all the time. But by paying attention to the tips in the book, we can transform a frustrating challenge into an activity that comes naturally to us. and getting more and better assignments as a result.

 

Editors, are your experiences with writers?

Writers, how are you managing the querying process I’d love to read your experiences, both positive and negative.

 Recommended Reading:

7 Great Query Letter Resources: A List of (E-)Books, Articles and Blog Links

  10 Things You Need to Do After You Sent That Awesome Query Letter

Filed Under: E-Book Reviews, Recommended Resources Tagged With: editors, editors unleashed, how to handle a writing assignment, how to work with editors, how to write a query, linda formichelli, query writing, query writing resources, query writing tips, the renegade writer, writer-editor relationships, writers, writers and editors, writing

Write Great Fiction Dialogue with Gloria Kempton

Posted on January 31, 2012 Written by Pinar Tarhan

Write Great Fiction Dialogue-Gloria Kempton
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This Writer’s Relationship with Dialogue

I love writing dialogue. In fact, I love it so much that I only started writing a novel this year, at the age of 27 (I’ve been writing since I was 9). So despite being in love with writing, it never occurred to me to try writing a novel because I had thought that only people who could (and would) write pages of narrative got published.

It was a misguided belief, but I blame it all on my dad’s library, which was full of international bestsellers that reeked of unbearably long and detailed narratives. Of course as I grew up, I discovered a lot of bestselling writers who found the perfect narrative/dialogue ratio, as well writers whose narrative flowed so well it read like juicy dialogue.

But despite finding writers whose books I could read hundreds of pages from in one sitting, I still doubted myself. Because I like dialogue so much, I preferred writing plays over stories, and screenplays over novels.

And yet the dream of being published, seeing my book printed and on the shelves, stayed with me. And with the inspiration I got from authors like Sophie Kinsella and Shari Low, I decided to just go for it.

I love the works of Kinsella and Low because they create fun characters, interesting plots, and hilariously authentic romantic comedies. OK, call it modern romance, chicklit, escapism….whatever. I love reading those kinds of stories, as well as creating them.

But I still had my doubts. Because unlike what Kinsella usually does, my heroine is not the heart of the story. And I didn’t want a first person story written in present tense. Because the story belongs to my male protagonist as much as the female. And despite having a lot in common, they have distinctly different personalities. They are also established professionals. So I have to adjust my tone every time I switch point of view. And guess what? I am writing with multiple viewpoints.

Why I Bought Writing Great Fiction

I needed some serious help. I didn’t want my characters to sound the same. I didn’t want any boring or unauthentic lines coming out of my characters’ mouths. I also didn’t want my story to look like it is all dialogue. I also had questions about formatting…Then I stumbled upon Gloria Kempton’s Write Great Fiction – Dialogue on Writer’s Digest’s shop.

I’ve been studying the book for a couple of months, and applying its tips on my book. I´ll be going whenever I get stuck, and I’ll also use it for editing and improving my manuscript.  And here is why this is one of the best resources:

What It Offers:

  • Lots of dialogue samples from a large variety of published and successful books
  • What to pay attention when you are writing dialogue (including its relationship with narrative and action)
  • What not to do
  • Lot of tips and exercises
  • Formatting your dialogue
  • How to know if your dialogue is working
  • How not to get carried away with fancy words and useless adverbs
  • Knowing your characters’ personality type, and writing accordingly
  • And a lot more.

The Book’s Language

One of my pet peeves is people who don’t practice what they preaches. But luckily Kempton isn’t one of them, as her tone throughout the whole book is while authorative, it is also fun, conversational and personal.

You know you can trust her advice (not just because her book was published by Writer’s Digest), but also it is clear that she has used her own advice and it works. How else would it be enjoyable to study a non-fiction book without wanting to put it away?

Filed Under: E-Book Reviews Tagged With: dialogue writing exercises, Gloria Kempton, how to write dialogue, how to write fiction, how to write good dialogue, write a novel, write fiction, write great fiction, writers digest books, writing a novel, writing dialogue, writing dialogue first novel, writing fiction

My Girlfriend’s Boyfriend’s Writer Ethan: Finding Love, Inspiration & Getting Published

Posted on January 28, 2012 Written by Pinar Tarhan

My Girlfriend's Boyfriend starring Alyssa Milano, Michael Landes & Christopher Gorham
My Girlfriend's Boyfriend starring Alyssa Milano, Michael Landes, Christopher Gorham. Writer Ethan is on the left. Image via amazon.

My Girlfriend’s Boyfriend Writing Character: Ethan played byChristopher Gorham

Ethan is a writer who can’t get published. His last novel is turned down because it is not realistic enough where it matter (and it is also not appealing enough to women’s fantasies of Mr. Right. ) Baffled and ready to give up, he goes to a café. There he meets the beautiful Jesse (Alyssa Milano). They like each other, and she says that she is all the inspiration he needs. They start dating, Ethan keeps writing.

Unbeknownst to Ethan, however, Jesse is also dating Troy (Michael Landes) – a guy who seems to be Mr. Right personified:  He is a successful advertising executive with his own company whereas Ethan is living rent free in his flat as long as he performs his super duties.

Jesse feels bad, as she starts falling for both and both men start falling for her. She will have to choose pretty soon….

The Novel, and The Movie Twist

(This part of the post features spoilers for the movie.  You can read the unspoiled review for the movie on my entertainment blog.)

The movie has us believe that Jesse is a two-timing girl who doesn’t quite deserve wither of these too-good-to-be men. But as it turns out, Jesse is not two-timing. Troy doesn’t exist.

Troy is the male protagonist Ethan creates to please his publisher, who just happens to be the improved version of Ethan. And while we often see Jesse conflicted, it is never openly said that she needs to choose between two guys. As it turns out, while she has been keeping a secret from Ethan only to ensure his happiness, it is not about another man.

So Ethan doesn’t give up fighting for Jesse in the end. He also doesn’t give up writing his novel- which finally gets him a publishing deal. We learn about “Troy” the moment Ethan provides us with the manuscript called Troy Meets Girl.

A Romantic Movie with a Creative Ending, and a Fictional Writer We Can Be Inspired By

While I was rooting for Ethan the entire time (both for his book and girl), I could also totally see what the publisher was talking about. We don’t want to finish a romantic novel or a movie and say “That would never happen”.  We want to say “That might happen, and I hope it happens to me”. And that is what the movie does.

Can we believe a decent guy being a writer, barely making ends meet but yet reluctant to make ends meet? Absolutely. Can we buy Christopher Gorham as a cute, albeit not gorgeous, movie lead? Definitely. And we can definitely see that his character is realistic. As sweet as he is, he is still a guy who loves Star Wars, hates musicals and can’t really see why the girls can’t get sick of Mr. Darcy.

So while it is not the best movie out there, it is inspiring, uplifting and motivating- whether you want to find The One, or make your writing dreams come true. Give it a shot- both to the movie and your writing. OK, especially to your writing.

If you liked this post, you might want to read posts from my Fictional Writers: Writer Characters in Movies, TV Series and Books category.

Filed Under: Fictional Writers: Writer Characters in Movies, TV Series and Books Tagged With: getting published, inspiration for writers, my girlfriends boyfriend, my girlfriends boyfriend movie, staying motivated, writer characters, writer characters in movies, writers, writing

How to Choose Your Web Host, My Experience and 3 Should-Read Articles

Posted on January 22, 2012 Written by Pinar Tarhan

A blog is a must for all writers these days as it is a great tool for promoting your work and services, publish original content, interacting with other writers and even for therapy. It feels great that you have a visible online medium where you can share your thoughts and see it published immediately.

But with your own blog, comes responsibility. You need to update it, enhance and improve it. You also might want to monetize it, and you do need a lot of space if you are planning to use your blog as a writer’s website and portfolio as well. And typically, free blogging platforms don’t usually com with unlimited space and diverse monetizing options.

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So if and when you feel the need to host your blog through a webhost company, your research might give you headaches as there are many host companies with very similar plans, fees and properties.

When choosing a host, you want it to give you enough space and bandwidth, a solid up-time (so that your website will be ready to browse and visitors won’t encounter a blog they can’t open) and the capacity not to crash when it sees a sudden increase in traffic.

But how do you choose a host when all host companies have affiliate programs and people are trying to earn money? Sure most affiliates are open about being affiliates, but how do you know the glowing reviews are real? Because for every good review, there is a bad one for the same brand. One writer’s ideal host can be another writer’s nightmare.

Which company do I use?

 

Now, there is nothing with affiliate marketing. I do it too. My blogs are hosted on Justhost.com, and I have an affiliate account with them.

 

What I like about Justhost

–          They have good and generally fast customer service. They respond to your problems quickly and do genuinely try to help.

–          They are not expensive.

–          They offer a free domain name with the account, and you can host as many websites as you want with them.

–          They have a user-friendly website.

What I don’t know about Justhost

–          I don’t know how helpful they would be if I wanted to change host. I never tried.

–          I’ve been experiencing some downtime lately, and I don’t know you get the same amount of time with another host (assuming you have the same shared hosting model there).

What I don’t like about Justhost (although this can be an issue for all shared hosting plans, regardless of the company)

–          That unlimited space and bandwidth isn’t that unlimited. After hundreds of photos and videos, and experimenting with lots of plugins, you might actually go over. Don’t ask me how, but it happened. I suddenly found an email explaining that they can’t open my blog because it went over and I should consider dedicating hosting. The kind of hosting that asks for $100/month and more. Well, I am not going to go dedicated until my site gets like a million visitors a day so I sent them a panicky and frustrated email. Fortunately, the problem was solved after me deleting the plugins that I weren’t using.

–          My entertainment blog doesn’t load as fast as I want it to be.

 

Why did I go with Justhost?

That’s my experience with one host company, and I have admit I chose them before I didn’t really know anything about host companies. I was on a tight budget, I didn’t want to pay extra for a domain name and I had several blogs I wanted to host. Currently they cost 3.75month at the time of this post, but please remember that the prices might change by the time you sign up.

3 Must-Read Posts for Choosing Your Host Company

So to give you a fuller picture, I found some great articles on how to choose a host company based on your needs.

Best Hosting for First Time Websites

This includes options and definitions for different hosting plans such as shared hosting, virtualized hosting, dedicated hosting and more. It features the pros and cons, as well as which option will be good for who. This is a must-read post if you have questions about hosting, whether you have used hosting companies or not.

A Few Good Web Hosting Providers

This no-BS post about hosting gives you the list of the elements you need to pay attention to and why. It also includes reviews and suggestions for 4 host companies, including pros and cons.

Why You Require the Best Blog Hosts for Images

This is especially useful if you are going to have a website with lots of images. I have an entertainment blog, so I use lots of pictures: movie posters, pictures, videos, stills…. I need space,  I don’t want my image-rich posts slowing down how fast the blog loads.

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Which host companies have you used? Which one are you considering using? Why? Please let me know in the comments, whether your experience was positive or negative.

 

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