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Off Campus, and The Appeal of The Hot, Sweet, and Smart Jock(s)

Posted on May 26, 2026 Written by Pinar Tarhan Leave a Comment

Off Campus Prime series poster featuring Ella Bright and Belmont Cameli
Fake dating, and (fast) friends to lovers….

I binged Off Campus on Prime, and I had the best time. The series was fun, sweet, emotional, and totally addictive, largely because of how well-written the male characters were.

When I saw the trailer, I knew the show was going to be sexy and fun. But, because I didn’t read the books (as I tend to read books with older characters), I wasn’t ready for how deep and emotional it’d be.

In case you haven’t read or watched yet:

Music major Hannah Wells (Ella Bright) has a huge crush on Justin, a fellow student and the attractive lead singer of a band. Justin, however, doesn’t know she exists.

College hockey team captain Garrett Graham (Belmont Cameli) is focused on getting out from under the shadow of his former hockey star dad. He doesn’t do girlfriends.

When Garrett needs help with his philosophy class, he offers to help Hannah get the guy in exchange for tutoring him. Their deal soon turns into an unexpected connection.

 

The Appeal of the Sweet Smart Jock, and How Off Campus Does It So Well

Off Campus Hannah and Garrett
Campus life was never this fun…

If there is one archetype I can’t resist as a reader, writer, and watcher is the hot, smart, sweet jock archetype that we don’t get to see often enough. More often than not, your jock can be stupid, a villain, or a womanizer…

On the off chance that he is decent, he’s usually either bad at school, doesn’t have any other interests or knowledge except his sport. He usually doesn’t have the deepest relationships with his best friends, and we don’t see vulnerability among the boys/men.

This is where Garrett and his teammates/friends shine: Garrett doesn’t believe in favors or shortcuts. He hates his dad, and he’s made it his life’s mission not to be like him. He loves classic rock, but he appreciates any music that sounds good to him. He never promises something he won’t deliver.

Tucker is one hell of a cook. While Dean sleeps around even more than Garrett, he’s upfront about it.  Logan pays attention to the people around him, and he’s best friends with his sister. When Garret’s in denial about his feelings for Hannah, his buddies knock sense into him. When Hannah asks Garrett for an important and intimate favor, he asks Dean for advice, and he delivers. These boys understand friendship, consent, and brotherhood.

Garrett doesn’t just come out on top when compared to other movie jocks, though. He’s a superior leading man, no matter who you compare him to. He’s flawed, as any human being is. But he listens, and he learns. And ultimately, nothing is sexier than good intentions, respecting one’s partner (and others around him), and putting in actual work to better oneself.

When Hannah shares her traumatic past with him, he reacts exactly how she wants him to react. When an incident takes him off the team for four games and puts his future in jeopardy, he still doesn’t share her story, even though sharing would have saved him.

It’s also the type of main male character I love writing in my own stories. Kevin in A Change Would Do You Good belongs to the same archetype. In his 30s, he has never had a serious relationship. It’s not that he doesn’t do girlfriends; he just doesn’t go past casual relationships. He dates A LOT, but women know exactly what to expect from him. When he runs into Janie, his beautiful new neighbor, he gets his flirt on. But recovering from a loss, Janie’s not dating anyone. Sure, he initially makes a mess of things. But he eventually understands where his lack of empathy comes from and apologizes. Then he is willing to try something new: being friends with someone he is really attracted to…

Both Kevin and Garrett learn that no matter how much your career means to you, it’s possible to make space in your life for things and people that matter. And a serious relationship with someone you love can be more fun than all the flings combined.

 

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Ultimately, Off Campus works because we’ve had enough of meaningless big gestures, characters who are emotionally decades younger than their biological age, characters who settle, and characters who mistake big fights and being opposites as attraction and passion.

Like all great stories that provide escapism, we get parties, hot people, and tight friends. But those only take you so far. Here, we also get a healthy, passionate love story based on a friendship. We get important themes and total vulnerability without sacrificing the fun.

And what better archetype to provide all this than the smart, sweet jock?

 

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Have you read or watched Off Campus yet? What do you think about this character archetype?

 

Filed Under: Movie and TV Series Recommendations, Romance, Writing Tagged With: bingeable romance series, character archetypes, college romance, fake dating, fake dating trope, friends to lovers, new adult romance, Off Campus series, sports romance, why the Off Campus series is so popular

Why the Enemies-to-Lovers Romance in Grimm Works So Well

Posted on April 18, 2026 Written by Pinar Tarhan

Enemies-to-lovers is one of the hardest romance tropes to pull off well.

Yet Grimm does exactly that. Over six seasons, it transforms one of its most antagonistic dynamics into a surprisingly grounded, emotional, and believable love story.

Even more impressively, it does this while juggling crime procedural plots, supernatural worldbuilding, and multiple romantic arcs.

So what makes this enemies-to-lovers storyline work so well?

Let’s break it down:

What Is Grimm About? (Quick Overview)

At 29, Nick’s shocked to discover he’s a Grimm, hunter of diverse supernatural creatures named Wesen, and that there’s an entire supernatural world out there. At this point in his life, he’s happy: He loves working with his best friend/partner detective (Hank), and he adores his live-in girlfriend Juliette.

Grimms can see “Wesen” when they go through intense emotions. Since regular people can only see them if the Wesen chooses, most people don’t know Wesen or Grimms exist.

As Nick struggles with his new identity and the mountain of new information he needs to digest, his secret puts a strain on all his relationships. Moreover, unbeknownst to him, his boss Captain Renard knows his secret, and he just might be one of his biggest enemies.

A new case leads Nick to a not-so-fun first interaction with Monroe (Blutbad) – a wolf-like Wesen. But as Monroe teaches Nick, there are good Wesen too. Soon, Nick’s relationship with Monroe turns into one of the most wholesome bromances of supernatural television.

As we solve one isolated case in each episode, we learn more about the Wesen world, Nick’s past, and who exactly Renard is.

 

The Romantic Dynamics in Grimm

Spoiler Warning: This post discusses major plot points from all six seasons of Grimm.

Please note that this is not meant to be a chronological, all-encompassing summary. However, I included the most pivotal moments to provide a sufficient overview of the romances. The friends-to-lovers and established couple romances are included to provide context for the enemies-to-lovers romance.

1. Nick and Juliette — The Established Relationship

Starting the show with a main character in a loving relationship is an excellent choice. We root for Nick harder, and it makes it even more devastating when things go wrong because of his destiny.

If you like men and enjoy healthy romances, Nick’s the guy you want: smart, sweet, loving, loyal, and painfully gorgeous.

We also get to see a healthy adult relationship as opposed to the angsty, star-crossed romances most supernatural stories have.

What goes wrong (1): Adalind, a witch-like Wesen called Hexenbiest.

When Nick makes her lose her powers after everything she has done to him and his loved ones, she turns into a regular woman. Adalind’s disappointed mom shows no sympathy.

Adalind still finds a way to use magic for revenge: She puts Juliette in a coma where she loses all her memory of Nick.

Eventually, Juliette regains her memory, and they resume their relationship, but not before putting both through hell. But there’s a silver lining: Shortly after getting her memories back, she learns Nick’s secret.

What goes wrong (2): Adalind.

Adalind gets pregnant with Renard’s baby, and later manages to get her powers back. But with her powers still inconsistent, and her baby under the threat of the Royals (a significant subplot), she finds herself under the protection of Kelly Burkhardt, Nick’s mom, and another powerful Grimm.

Not knowing who Adalind is, Kelly brings them to Nick for protection. Nick and Renard (an ally at this point) are both convinced that the best way to protect this child with royal blood is raising her away from everyone, including Adalind, so they devise a plot. Enraged with grief, Adalind cuts a deal with the Royals and does something horrific to take away Nick’s powers: She “becomes” Juliette through powerful magic and has sex with him.

Nick and Juliette work through this while adjusting to a life without Nick’s powers. But with so much Wesen crime, and Rosalee (a friendly Wesen) and Monroe in mortal danger because of an extremist Wesen group, they make Nick a Grimm again: Juliette uses similar magic and “turns into” Adalind temporarily and has sex with Nick. This decision comes with unforeseen side effects: Juliette slowly becomes a hexenbiest.

At first, she’s afraid to tell Nick, creating distance. When she finally tells him, she is convinced their relationship will never survive this. As she embraces her powers, she becomes a formidable enemy.

While Nick and Juliette are broken up at this point, their forever end comes when Juliette makes a deal with the Royals to lure Kelly (Nick’s mom) back to Portland. Kelly’s murdered, and Juliette tries to kill Nick.

Nick only survives as Trubel, a fellow Grimm, “kills” Juliette. Trubel and Juliette’s body are both taken from the crime scene by an unknown organization.

 

2. Rosalee and Monroe — Friends to Lovers

When Wesen Rosalee becomes a target, Nick asks Monroe to help keep an eye on her.

They become friends, and it slowly turns into a deep connection. After dating for a while, they move in together.

Before their wedding, they have to deal with Monroe’s parents who are against inter-species dating, but Monroe makes it clear that if they don’t accept their relationship, they will lose him forever.

After their wedding, they reckon with a Wesen hate group kidnapping Monroe.

They manage to put an end to the group, and Rosalee and Monroe get their happily (eventful) ever after.

 

 3. Nick and Adalind — Enemies to Lovers

 

If you’d told me this was going to happen during season 1, I wouldn’t have believed you. But the writers made it organic and lovely.

After Adalind, disguised as Juliette, sleeps with Nick, she becomes pregnant. She realizes that her only means of survival is Nick’s protection against Juliette, a furious and powerful hexenbiest hellbent on killing her.

Nick chooses to protect his child. In an effort to “fix” Julitte, Adalind helps the group out, even testing the hexenbiest “suppressor” – a potion that will suppress her powers – on herself to make sure it will work. This marks the start of Adalind being helpful and trustworthy.

Juliette turns it down and almost makes Nick kill Monroe using her powers, burning all her bridges in one go.

Adalind gives birth and names the baby boy Kelly after Nick’s mom, as she was the one who kept Adalind and her baby alive.

She also asks Nick to raise the baby together, and she moves in with him. He sells the house and moves them to a safer warehouse-type loft.

Unable to sleep due to nerves, Adalind asks Nick to sleep beside her since she will sleep better knowing he will kill anyone wanting to hurt them or their baby. Nick agrees. (Which also gives us the one-bed trope).

Living together, raising a child together, and seeing Adalind be a good mom/friend/roommate brings them closer together. Adalind has changed for the better: She sincerely apologizes for what she has done to Nick and Juliet, and says she wishes she could take it all back. Nick corrects her by saying except for their son, and she agrees. They kiss, but afterwards they agree that it might be too complicated.

(Side note: I should briefly mention that at this point Juliette is alive and working for an organization that deals with bad Wesen – the group Trubel is also with. Her evil tendencies are broken down. She’s powerful, but doesn’t feel. She calls herself Eve. Meeting Eve and getting used to her is an adjustment.)

Nick and Monroe need to go to Germany to find what Nick’s ancestors buried centuries ago. Before Nick leaves, Adalind tells Nick she’s worried and she loves him. They make love for the first time. They are both surprised by how much their relationship has changed.

Meanwhile, there are still some secrets between them. Adalind’s powers are slowly coming back, but she’s afraid to tell Nick. Renard calls her, asking to meet up.

With Nick’s support, Adalind returns to work at her old law firm where they know what she is.

When the city’s mayoral candidate, who Renard publicly supported, is murdered, the candidate’s campaign team asks Renard to replace him. As a zauberbiest (male hexenbiest) who loves power, he accepts.

To guarantee victory, they want Renard to have a family, so they threaten Adalind with Nick and Kelly. To protect them and reunite with her daughter Diana (her child with Renard), she goes to live with Renard. She leaves a note for Nick explaining why, and it takes all his friends and his willpower to stop Nick from violently confronting Renard.

But he still has to work for Renard. And after he wins the election, Nick confronts him. Renard has him arrested. When Wesen cops take over, Nick’s life is put in danger. With the help of Wu (another cop/friend in the know) and Hank, he manages to escape, but he has to remain on the run.

When he gets the chance, he reunites with Adalind. However, the Zauberbiest in charge of this new order, Bonapart, is more powerful than her. She misses Nick and their family. Nick tells Adalind to hold on a little longer. (Luckily, Diana gets her father to kill Bonapart using her powers.)

Nick finally beats Renard for good: He uses the spell Adalind used to replace Juliet. He “becomes” Renard and resigns on camera before he officially takes office. Renard agrees to reinstate Nick and lets Adalind and the kids go.

Nick and his friends return to work, though they still work for Renard.

Adalind and Nick’s relationship is stronger this time, as there are no more secrets.

Nearing the series finale, Nick and Eve cross over to the other world to battle a devil-like creature seeking Diana to make her his child bride. Inadvertently, they bring him back to this world, so a protective spell’s placed on Diana.

Nick takes Adalind, Renard, and the kids to a remote place the creature won’t be able to find. Before he leaves, Nick tells Adalind that he loves her. She tells him that she loves him too.

Nick eventually wins after what seems like an all-is-lost forever moment and reunites with his loved ones.

20 years later, Nick and Adalind are still together, and Diana and Kelly are keeping up the family legacy with them.

 

 

Why Nick and Adalind’s Enemies-to-Lovers Arc Works

If you’re a romance writer or trope lover, you might want to bookmark this for later.

 1. Supernatural Stories Allow Moral Flexibility

Supernatural stories have a better shot at making enemies-to-lovers work, precisely because our morals are more flexible while reading and watching such genres.

Take me, for instance. I’m all for healthy relationships where couples haven’t stabbed each other in the back prior to getting together. But this is also the type of story where we don’t care if a centuries-old being falls in love with a teenage/young adult human, readers love a bad “boy” character with a serial killer past (hello Stefan from TVD!) or even a psychotic present (hello, *Damon from TVD!).

Compared to many other supernatural show characters, what Adalind did is relatively mild and forgivable, especially since she changed, took accountability, and made up for it with her later behavior. There were also many mitigating circumstances.,

 2. Adalind’s Actions Are Contextualized, Not Excused

 

  • When she slept with Nick as Juliette, she didn’t know she was going to be pregnant, just like she didn’t know Juliette would turn into a hexenbiest.
  • How Juliette handled being a hexenbiest wasn’t on her.
  • She didn’t have a loving childhood or anyone who loved her unconditionally. Both Renard and her mom used her, and then they discarded her.
  • Nick’s mom saving her was kindness she’d never experienced before. And we do feel for her when her daughter Diana’s taken away. While Nick and Renard meant well, there was no way she was going to take it sitting down while postpartum and not knowing where her kid was.
  • As much as she tried to kill Nick and Hank while she was a hexenbiest, that came from Renard, who she was romantically involved with earlier in her life.
  • She never set a trap for Nick’s mom. Juliette felt bad when she found out what happened to Kelly, but that didn’t stop her from trying to kill Nick.

 

 3. Compatibility Matters

Attraction is great, but making a committed relationship work takes compatibility.

Before Nick was a Grimm, Juliette and Nick were right for each other.

But having to constantly keep secrets from each other doesn’t make a healthy relationship. She didn’t take it well when Nick tried to tell her either.

Adalind is a supernatural. They have a kid together. She is powerful, and the final time she became a hexenbiest, she carried her love for her family with her. There were no evil side effects that came with her powers.

The enemies-to-lovers trope was expertly helped by one-bed, close proximity, and surprise pregnancy tropes.

4. The Relationship Evolved Through Close Proximity

Former enemies turned to coparents first. Then their peaceful coparenting was helped by:

  • Close proximity (by living together)
  • One-bed

And let’s not forget the trope that started it all:

  • Surprise pregnancy

 

 5. Nick’s Perspective Shifts Gradually

Nick doesn’t just wake up one day and find himself inexplicably drawn to Adalind. He sees her change and be consistent in the change day after day.

 

 Final Thoughts on Grimm’s Enemies-to-Lovers Romance

This enemies-to-lovers arc is earned because the writers took their time and didn’t “forget” or ignore anything in the past. This main trope was supported by several other well-chosen tropes that felt natural.  These aren’t just romantic conveniences; they create repeated, unavoidable moments of vulnerability and intimacy.

From the moment they moved into the loft together, I was rooting for Adalind and Nick, and this is coming from someone who loved to hate Adalind for about 4,5 seasons.

 

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How do you feel about this enemies-to-lovers storyline? Let me know in the comments. 🙂

 

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Extreme Makeovers, Fiction Edition: From Younger to A Change Would Do You Good

Posted on October 21, 2025 Written by Pinar Tarhan

 

Change is hard. Even if you’re the one who wants to make a change, life often gets in the way with a vengeance. Health problems, financial issues, time crunches, people around you being unsupportive, fear, and a whole lot more work against you, preventing you from making those changes as fast as you’d like.

Then there are the changes you didn’t ask for but life threw at you anyway: relationships failing, friends drifting apart, clients going in a different direction…It’s even harder to adapt to changes you didn’t see coming because this time you have to deal with the loss of what was and create motivation out of thin air. Yikes.

So it’s always good to have some external inspiration nudging us in the right direction, making us feel not alone. Below are 3 TV series and 2 novels that prove extreme changes, as challenging as they are, can be the best things that happen to us.

And the good news is, the changes you want to or have to make will probably not be as wild!

Younger (2015-2021) starring Sutton Foster

40-year-old Liza’s (Sutton Foster) life needs a reset button asap: divorced with a daughter in college, Liza wants to get back to her previous career in publishing. Problem? No one is willing to hire her at her age with that long gap in her resume. That’s when her best friend/artist Maggie (Debbie Mazar) comes up with a radical life makeover plan: Change Liza’s makeup/hair/wardrobe so that she can look and act like a 27-year-old.

It works! With her old “soul”, maturity, wisdom beyond her years, and knowledge of books, she finally gets a job. However, bumps occur when she develops a close friendship with an actual 20-something co-worker and crushes on a 20-something tattoo artist (Nico Tortorella) who believes she is around his age. What makes things even more complicated is that she also bonds with her late-40s handsome boss (Peter Hermann) who is not happy he’s attracted to someone so much younger…

Younger is a brilliant and funny show full of heart. It takes down stereotypes and agism, while it makes us grapple with a solid dilemma: What would you do if you were forced to choose between honesty and happiness in all areas of your life?

 

Rookie (2018-…. ) starring Nathan Fillion

 

When 40-something John Nolan (Nathan Fillion) faces a life-or-death situation after his divorce, pursuing his dream to be a police officer seems like a no-brainer. With his only child in college, if he doesn’t pursue this now, when will he?

But being the oldest rookie in the LAPD won’t be easy, especially with his superior seemingly out to get him. But as he forms close friendships with younger rookies Jackson and Lucy, he knows he made the right call. And while the training officers are skeptical, he proves to everyone that life experience, empathy, and emotional intelligence are priceless skills, and he is an asset to the force rather than a liability.

 

Matlock (2024-…) starring Kathy Bates

 

Madeleine Matlock is a 70-something attorney who’s dying to get back into law after years spent raising a family. She uses her invisibility and people’s constant underestimation of her as a superpower and manages to land a job at a prestigious law firm.

But unbeknownst to her new colleagues and bosses, she has a big secret: She lost her adult daughter to opioid addiction. Raising her preteen grandson with her husband, she has infiltrated to expose those people who enable the drug company’s distribution and marketing.

As lines blur and friendships grow, Madeline will have to keep outsmarting everyone.

 

Book Series: A Change Would Do You Good – Romcom, Contemporary Fiction

A Change Would Do You Good is a romcom novel where the main character continues to inspire me to this day.

Months after her boyfriend dies and her friends move to another country, Janie’s desperate to feel good again. She gives her life an extreme makeover: She moves to another city, complete with a different car and wardrobe. The good news? The chaotic new people in her life provide just the distraction she needs. The bad news? She is definitely not ready for the attraction she feels for her surfer neighbor Kevin, who just might be the hottest and most insensitive person she has ever met. But is Kevin really only good for something casual, or is he also starting to feel something that he can’t ignore?

While Janie has the money and good health to make the changes she does, it still takes a lot of guts to make such big changes. Instead of her blossoming career in LA as a fashion designer, she opts to work for a much smaller agency in San Diego. She leaves her loving family and other friends behind. She goes from the peace and quiet of her house to an apartment building filled with quirky neighbors. Even as an extrovert, she struggles to adjust to her new reality, especially since she is still grieving the loss of the wonderful man she was in a fantastic, loving relationship with.

A Change Would Do You Good is the first book in the A Change Would Do You Good romcom trilogy. And as Janie deals with her grief and makes a new life for herself with new friends, the second and third book continue with her and her friends & neighbors’ adventures. You can check out the first two books on Amazon. I’m currently working on the final book.

You can read this ensemble fun as an e-book and a paperback. It’s also free to read on Kindle Unlimited.

Book Series: Nellie’s Fire Nehalennia’s Daughters Book 1 – A Paranormal Women’s Fiction Fantasy

Nellie Jansen has a good life in the Netherlands. She loves her job, her partner Bram, and their daughter. She’s not looking to change anything. Until she discovers she is a powerful fire witch, and she will have to get used to her powers, learn about her heritage, and save the world in the process.

If you love your strong female protagonists who also tend to be supernaturally powerful and will do everything to save those she loves, you’re going to love this. And if Nellie can cope with the monumental changes thrown her way, then there is hope for all of us.

 

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How do you feel about change? Did you watch or read any of these works? Let me know in the comments!

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The Windsor Love Pact: A New Romcom by Lizzie Chantree

Posted on May 30, 2025 Written by Pinar Tarhan

Today, my friend and the lovely and talented Lizzie Chantree launched her romcom The Windsor Love Pack. Below’s a bit about Chantree and an excerpt from her novel:

About Lizzie Chantree

International bestselling author, award-winning inventor and product designer, Lizzie Chantree, has been featured on television and radio. She discovered her love of writing fiction when her children were little and now writes books (many based in Essex) full of friendship and laughter, that are about women who are far stronger than they realise. Lizzie has recently combined her love of writing and design by launching a range of sustainable book and writing-themed fashion and homewares, that are being worn and displayed by influencers, worldwide. She lives with her family on the coast in Essex.

She lives with her family on the coast in Essex. Visit her website at lizziechantree.com, or follow her on Twitter, @Lizzie_Chantree

The Windsor Love Pack Excerpt:

Chapter 1.

Maya gasped in shock as a man barrelled into her, knocking the lukewarm coffee she’d been sipping straight over her white vintage lace t- shirt. Time froze for a second before she realised that he was holding her arms to steady her and apologising profusely. ‘I’m so sorry!’ he said, his tone breathless as he pushed the black baseball cap he was wearing further back to reveal more of his face and then glanced behind him. Maya felt another punch of surprise as she recognised the piercing blue of his eyes first and then the fact that they were filled with panic. She looked over his shoulder and noted a crowd forming on the other side of the pretty little flower-adorned bridge they were standing on and frowned, before understanding dawned.

Recalling the feeling of having no privacy, she quickly wondered how she could limit the damage to this escalating situation. ‘Please let me pay for your dry cleaning and coffee,’ he said hurriedly, as he tried to draw her away from the crowd, who looked as if they were deciding how much they could push their luck by approaching their idol. Maya’s own eyes sparkled as she had literally just been thinking that her days were pretty quiet, after her own touches with fame. Now she was standing on the bridge next to her rental house with devilishly handsome bad boy, Noah Benedict! It was like a scene from one of his movies.

‘It’s fine,’ she said lightly. ‘It looks like you’re in a bit of a predicament,’ she nodded towards the crowd who were just now beginning to walk towards them as Maya and Noah rapidly turned back towards her house and the docks along that side of the river.

‘I was feeling a bit stir crazy and thought no one would notice me if I had a quick early morning stroll,’ he shrugged and then grinned self-depreciatingly, which made a few butterflies take flight in her stomach.

‘We all start pretty early here if we’re working on the boats and the cafe?s on that side of the water bring in droves of early morning dog walkers. I live here…’ she pointed towards the first townhouse, then flushed as that might seem a tad stalkerish and forward. ‘I meant to hide in!’ she hurried on, and he chuckled, but then looked over her shoulder again and grimaced. ‘But they already know you’re here and if that’s your boat,’ she nodded towards the shiny black powerboat that she’d seen docked outside his mansion situated further up the river when she helped on the river cruises, ‘then that’s your best bet. Jump in and I’ll walk back across the bridge and hold them off. I probably know most of them.’

He heaved a huge sigh of relief and quickly took her hand to thank her. ‘Your clothes and coffee. What can I do to compensate you?’ he asked again as they reached his boat and he threw the cap in, leaving his dark blonde hair all mussed-up and sexy.

‘It’s nothing. It will take me two seconds to change clothes and I work across the water, so I won’t even be late for work.’ She smiled warmly at him, to show him she was sincere and he breathed a sigh of relief.

‘Thank you,’ he said as he jumped into his boat and set o!. ‘I don’t even know your name,’ he called back, but she’d already turned and was walking rapidly towards the bridge and he had to quickly start the engine and move the boat back into the centre of the river.

After persuading the group on the bridge that there was nothing to see now, Maya caught her breath and stepped aboard Bertha, the timeworn steamboat that was docked on the river Thames, and waved to Joe, her grandad’s best friend and one of her favourite people on Earth. What a morning! Joe ran the only steamboat on this stretch of the river, with its black and gold railings and cream and black lifebuoy rings that were tied at intervals with bright orange rope. The forest-green awning that covered the seating area had seen better days and the paddle wheel needed a lick of paint, but the boat was still majestic despite being weathered from the water and passing of time. Bertha’s faded grandeur caught the interest of tourists walking around the dock area, and she often featured in people’s holiday snaps. Joe’s business was largely based on ferrying tourists up and down the estuary and regaling them with local history, even if Maya was pretty sure he embellished his stories here and there for his own entertainment when she wasn’t around to chide him. She wouldn’t be surprised if he added in a visiting humpback whale or a dragon living in the nearby castle at some point.

She ran her hands along the wooden handrail and enjoyed the feeling of her feet being back on board the solid timbers of Bertha’s deck. She’d missed this… both being on the water and part of a bustling community. The river path was still a feathery assault course of swans and geese, hopeful that a passing child might drop a morsel of food and she breathed in the honey-sweet scent of the golden Marsh marigolds and tall grasses that were swaying in the slight breeze across the water, reminding her of home. Sometimes she couldn’t believe how much her life had changed, but it felt good to be surrounded by so many memories of her childhood.

Maya grinned and waved to Roman, the guy who helped Joe with the river cruises. Roman had his long dread? locks held back with a headband as usual and he sent her a winning smile as he helped a customer step over the threshold of the deck, holding her walking stick, handbag and half-empty bottle of vodka! Maya’s mouth dropped open and then she giggled as Roman handed the items back to the woman once she was safely on board.

‘Roman,’ she called out, ‘do you need some help?’ The woman was certainly unsteady on her feet, but Maya suspected it was more likely from the drink than the need for her walking stick, as she was currently waving it at a huge seagull, who was regarding her with keen interest.

Roman shook his head, which made the ends of his hair fly around his shoulders. ‘I think I can manage.’ He winked, already reaching out to assist the next passenger on board. Maya made a note to sit near to the wobbly customer, just in case she fell overboard. There was a wooden-panelled bar in the centre of the boat with art deco effect mirroring along the back wall, that would have been opulent and glamorous in its heyday, but they only really served lukewarm rose? wine now so it was unusual for them to have to worry about customers overindulging, as they spent most of their time gazing at the lush river views, or into the verdant gardens of the exclusive houses that lined the waterfront. Maya eyed the woman who was laughing uproariously at something her friend said, then saw that they were celebrating something by the way the second woman brought out a slightly squashed cake and some candles that she quickly discarded after a glance at Bertha’s wooden bench seating. She pulled a couple of plastic forks from her turquoise bag and they both tucked in with relish and more giggles. One of the ladies caught Maya’s hand as she passed and she turned to them with a polite smile.

‘Are we likely to see Noah Benedict on this cruise?’ asked one, as she took both their plates and slipped them back into her bag, crumbs and all, which made Maya wince. The other lady sat forward eagerly and Maya bit her lip in mirth. Most of their customers mainly wanted a glimpse of Noah, the charismatic movie star who lived along the river in a beautiful glass and metal house that must have incredible views of the river. Before he’d crashed into her that morning, Maya had actually glimpsed Noah herself on the grounds of his estate a few times and she could understand everyone’s excitement. Being so close to him for a few moments had been a whole different experience. Magnetism shone from him, even in his harassed state. He had the usual Hollywood film star classic good looks; blonde tousled hair and piercing blue eyes with a requisite drool- worthy body that must take hours of punishment in the gym. The hunted look on his face had surprised her though. She’d assumed he courted publicity, as he was always featured in the press.

‘I can’t promise anything,’ she said, much to the ladies’ obvious disappointment, ‘but there have been more sightings of him from Bertha than any other cruise on the river,’ she added quickly, not mentioning that some of the villagers had seen him up close and in person that very morning. These feisty ladies might lynch her!

Despite her broken-heart, Maya had started to feel that she was – slowly – starting to heal. It was good to be back again, back among people who’d known her as a child. Living beside the ebb and “ow of the river after the glitz and glamour of the life and relationship that she’d had to leave behind, had brought her a quiet joy. Her old routine involved a fast-paced work life, creating intricate jewellery for influencers, celebs and attending non-stop parties. Now she spent her time by or on the water, on Joe’s boat or on the bank sketching wildlife, while she tried to come to terms with the loss of her jewellery design business and fiance?. Walking in on him in bed with Portia, one of their models, had brought her glittering career and what she’d thought was a good life with her fiance? crashing down around her.

Maya thought back to her first sight of Blake. He was tall, dark and handsome, and surrounded by a group of eager women. He had been sitting astride a chair in their art class, where they were studying jewellery design, and his eyes met hers as she’d walked in. She’d felt a frisson of heat go down her spine and her cheeks flush. He’d sat next to her when their lecturer arrived and her heart was already metaphorically in his hands. They’d been so young. Together, their ideas were magic, though. Maya’s designs were unusual and customers adored her work. Blake quickly realised his genius lay in marketing, so he left the design work to Maya. An up-and-coming reality star had been photographed wearing one of their Luna Moth neck? laces with delicately arched wings and sweeping tail in a nightclub in Soho, and suddenly everyone wanted to know their brand. Influencers were talking about them and their phones buzzed from morning to night with requests from stylists asking to borrow jewellery for events. They had been a dream team for a while with high-profile parties, celebrity endorsements and a swanky new “at. Their list of clients had grown and although she’d been shy and hadn’t relished the spotlight, Blake had courted it.

‘Our success is down to my marketing skills,’ he’d repeated like a mantra.

‘Of course,’ she’d always appeased, as she’d sketched some new jewellery ideas, keeping her eyes down and firmly on her work.

‘Pieces landing in the right person’s hands takes weeks of networking,’ he’d crowed, making excuses for why he was always out late at night, but people came back time and time again for her beautiful designs. Most of their customers thought Blake was the designer because he was the public face of the company – and he didn’t disabuse them of that notion. To them she was the boho partner in her glamorous one-off pieces that her grandmother had designed and her love of vintage. Maya glanced down at her current attire of an A-line skirt that sat a few inches above her knees and looked like it had been scattered with flowers as the print was of regal purple dahlias, the contrasting pink and white petals of cosmos and flowering sage on a white woven background. Above that she had a cute little white short-sleeved shirt she’d tied at her waist and a pretty little nasturtium flower brooch, with its wide petals and splashes of colour at its centre. She’d taken a second look at her coffee stained outfit of a lace top and jeans earlier, and decided to make a bit more of an effort, as you never knew who you might bump into in this town it seemed, she smiled to herself. Not that she was ever likely to stumble across Noah Benedict again and she was definitely not attracted to sexy rogues any more. She’d learned that lesson the hard way and her heart carried the scars.

Blake clearly preferred sleek blondes like Portia. Portia had been wearing an incredibly expensive 18-carat diamond necklace Maya had designed and nothing else. Maya had looked at them both and felt like the air had been sucked out of her lungs. Portia had gasped and grabbed the bloody diamond necklace – as if Maya was about to rip it from her throat – and then darted to the bathroom to lock herself in. Maya hadn’t smashed anything, nor screamed accusations at Blake. She’d just let the bottom fall out of her world while Blake scrabbled around to find his jeans and trademark white tee. Then she’d turned on her heel and run, tears streaming down her face, heart smashed into a million tiny pieces.

She’d swept up the few personal items from her desk, leaving everything else behind. Unfortunately, that included a folder of her designs for their forthcoming, much anticipated collection. For a long time after the breakup Maya had hidden herself away at her grandparents’ house where she’d grown up with her siblings and dissolved into all-too-frequent tears at the world and the injustice of loving a man who didn’t value her.

Maya had barely left the house, her family tip-toeing around her and whispering in corners in hushed tones. She’d hardly been able to eat because she felt that the affair must have been her fault; she wasn’t attentive enough, talented enough, sexy enough, clever enough. Maya had never been short on admiring looks from men, but Blake had chipped away at the way she dressed and behaved until she’d been reduced to being grateful that he loved her. She wouldn’t put herself through the pain of a broken heart again.

Slowly, with the help of her family and her best friend Leah, she’d begun to heal. Being close to the water, riverside plants and the wildlife they attracted, like the ever-darting dragonflies and busy bees, had helped and she’d started designing again. Smaller jewellery at first and then bolder and more intricate pieces that were inspired by the shapes and forms of the flowers she discovered growing by the river.

Maya rested her elbows on the rail as she watched the world pass by and a couple of fish darted along in the frothy white ripples that Bertha created in the water. As the boat steamed along, Maya wished her troubles would wash away with the breeze and she could truly start again.

Leah had popped round the night before and tentatively suggested that she consider dating again. The friends had met a couple of years previously, but to Maya, it felt like they’d known each other their whole lives and she didn’t know how she’d survived without a confidante and cheer? leader like Leah before that.

‘No thanks,’ Maya had replied as she reached into the fridge for a second chilled bottle of sauvignon blanc.

‘But…’ Leah had begun, but Maya had given her one of those stares that told her to shut up and drink her wine.

This conversation seemed a recurrent theme with her friends and family these days. Her grandparents constantly tried to match-make her with the grandsons of friends or neighbours. Dodging the topic was becoming an art form. No way, she wasn’t ready.

It had taken everything she had to pick herself up again and she’d spent the last two years building up a new jewellery brand that was hers and hers alone – No.1 Ethereal Lane. She’d worked from her workroom in her house by the river, sketching new ideas while helping Joe and on Bertha, and now her brand was being noticed. A particular piece, an exquisite cluster of white-gold bell-shaped comfrey flowers with shimmering emerald-winged stalks and curved silver leaves, had just gone viral, the collection selling out immediately. Post after post appeared on social media about the collection and the press were now on the trail of the mysterious designer behind the brand, because no one seemed to know who that was. Had it been Blake’s marketing wizardry that had propelled them to the level of success their business had reached last time, or was it her designs that customers fell in love with and were clamouring to buy?

Joe beckoned her over with a wave and Maya slid her sketching pencils and sketch pad back into her canvas tote bag, leaving it tucked under the bench by her feet so no one could trip over it. ‘How are the birthday girls getting along?’ he asked, inclining his head to the women who were currently leaning over the guard rails to look at the fluffy- downed cygnets that were paddling at the side of the river.

Maya bit her lip in mirth. ‘They’ve been nattering about how to get the attention of our gorgeous captain to persuade him to go of course,’ she teased. Joe laughed. Customers often flirted with Joe as he was so handsome. He looked like a dashing pirate and certain female clientele seemed to think he came with the boat and was there for the picking! Joe would shake his head and roll his eyes with good humour.

Maya moved over to nudge hips with Roman as he stood at the guard rail by the port side of the boat and he grinned and nudged her back. They enjoyed flirty banter with each other, but although Roman was gorgeous, he still occasionally dated his extremely fiery and vocal ex-girl? friend from the next town and getting thrown into the middle of an argument was the last thing Maya needed. Roman’s angular cheekbones and cheeky smile often got schoolgirl giggles from their female customers and he enjoyed every moment, she knew. ‘It’s quiet again today,’ Maya noted, glancing around at the almost clear decks.

Roman winced and shrugged. ‘I know. The worry lines on Joe’s face can’t get any deeper!’ he tried to joke as they both glanced at Joe, who was standing by the huge black paddle wheel. Maya put her arm around Roman’s shoulders and gave him a squeeze of comfort. ‘Olive needs her hip op and Joe can’t afford to stay at home and help her. We don’t have enough passengers as it is.’

‘I agree. Olive’s been hobbling around their bungalow for months.’ Maya sighed and tears sprung to her eyes. ‘He’s so stubborn.’ Joe’s wife, Olive, needed him at home, but the business required him to be on board. Maya helped as much as she could, serving drinks from Joe’s collection of mismatched glassware and checking tickets. It wasn’t enough. ‘We must come up with a plan to help,’ she added and Roman hugged her back before moving away. ‘Let me know if you think of anything.’

She watched Roman walk towards Joe and noticed that his shoulders were sagging in defeat. If Bertha was dry docked, she might not make it back into the water – and both Joe and Roman would lose their livelihood.

The boat drew up near Noah’s waterfront pad and Maya leaned over the guard rail and breathed in the fresh river air, closing her eyes for a quiet moment of contemplation as the breeze touched her face. Noah’s sleek black power boat was moored by the wide raised wooden jetty to the front of his property, so he’d made it back alive! She thought of those piercing blue eyes and the way they’d briefly settled on her dark brown ones and then shook the image away.

Working on the deck of a boat might be unusual for some, but it suited her. After all, she could work pretty much anywhere that inspired her. Maya sat cross-legged on the bow and considered Joe’s options, which were limited. As she watched the riverbank glide past, she sighed when she saw a young couple strolling along with a frolicking dog, smiling as they held each other’s hands. That had been her once. She took her phone out of her bag, glancing despondently at the screen. She was sure that her ex, Blake, would have loads of inspired ideas about how to help Joe. He’d texted her constantly when they split up, but there had been over a year of silence now. She swiped open an old text and !inched, waiting for the pain they usually brought. She needed to permanently delete them and move on, but she’d kept one or two and she didn’t really know why. It was as if she couldn’t quite let go of the last strands of their relationship, which was ridiculous because she’d definitely moved on. Maya almost snarled at the phone and the woman sitting next to her frowned and turned her way.

‘Are you okay, dear?’ she asked, patting Maya’s hand.

‘Sorry!’ Maya shivered, wishing she’d brought a jumper as the wind was picking up as they neared the halfway point of the cruise and her hair kept flying in her face. ‘Old message from my ex,’ she explained, grimacing and not wanting to explain further. The face of the woman next to her hardened and she urged her to take a fork and a mouthful of the remaining squashed cake, which Maya gratefully accepted.

‘Delete it,’ she advised sagely. ‘This will help,’ the woman insisted, patting her hand in solidarity. The cake was deliciously chocolaty, which immediately restored Maya’s good spirits and filled the air with the indulgent scent of earthy cocoa and sweet vanilla. She shook her head at the offer of a tipple of vodka, but was sorely tempted. She shoved the phone firmly back into her bag and knew she wouldn’t receive another text. Other than that one time… Blake had always been predictable. She had nothing to offer him now and he always had his eye on the prize.

Maya sat back to let the sun that peeked through the clouds for a minute or two warm her face, then pulled her sketchpad back out of her bag. She began sketching the common reeds that were swaying in the wind and the oval leaves and beautifully scented, spiky-looking flowers of the water mint on the river bank as they sailed slowly by.

She was building something new after feeling like she’d been without an anchor for the past two years. Her heart was finally healing and being back home with the inspiration of the river and all its surrounding natural beauty was inspiring her creativity. Her new-found success would annoy the hell out of Blake. Suddenly – unexpectedly – she was taking over the world of high-end jewellery design again, this time with no one knowing her name. People were beginning to know her brand, No.1 Ethereal Lane, but the designer behind the intricately cut designs was unknown and she intended to keep it that way.

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