Addicted to Writing

Manage Your Freelance Writing Career While Writing What You Love

  • About Pinar Tarhan
  • Blog
  • Books
  • Hire Me: Services
  • Contact Me
  • Portfolio
  • Favorite Resources
  • Newsletter

How to Make Your Editor Happy with Linda Formichelli’s Editors Unleashed – UPDATED

Posted on February 3, 2012 Written by Pinar Tarhan

cartoon about editors

Image via 4.bp.blogspot.com

The Holly Query

Your relationship with an editor usually starts with the query letter. She might like it and decide to assign you to the topic, or she might just decide that it is horrible and send it to the bin. Given their importance, writing queries can be scary.

Writing queries used to freak me out. I can’t say I am now in love with the process of querying, but at least they don’t scare or overwhelm me anymore. I realized that the hardest part of writing a good query, at least to me, is finding that awesome angle that will fit the magazine readers’ needs and wants correctly while managing to describe this angle in a compelling way in your query. Of course even if you think you got it right, there is the possibility that topic was recently snatched by another writer, and you were a little late.

The Query Is Only the Beginning

But let’s assume that you do know how to send the right kind of query, and let’s assume that you got the job. Congratulations, you’ve got one foot in the door. But now that you started a relationship, you need to work on maintaining a good one by delivering quality work on time, written, styled and formatted according to the parameters you discussed with the editor. And after you come through, sending a second query to that editor will be easier. The editor himself can even call you and ask if you want another assignment.

So you need to do your homework well, send the impeccable query, and listen to the editor.

So far, so obvious, right?  I mean did you really need to be told to check your grammar or not attempt a query before knowing your way around the magazine, and its writer’s guidelines?

What Not To Do With and After The Query- Editors Unleashed

But  apparently some writers do, otherwise Linda Formichelli’s Editors Unleashed would not have needed to cover so much ground with the editor pet peeves.

In this entertaining and informative e-book, she has talked to several editors about how some writers infuriate them during and after query.

But the beauty of this book isn’t that they only share writer “horror” stories, but also the good stories where the writer got and completed the assignment with grace and continued to work with the editor.

There are lots of resources on how to write successful queries, and Linda Formichelli’s free packet of 10 query letters that got her assignments is one of them. It can be obtained by subscribing to her free newsletter.  Formichelli is a successful freelance writer and the co-author of the bestselling book The Renegade Writer. She blogs on The Renegade Writer.

Editors Unleashed used to cost $6.95, but now it is the second free gift for subscribing to  The Renegade Writer. This ultra-useful book  covers query dos and donts as well as what attitude editors expect from writer once the query lands them the job.

Reading this book will help you:

1)      To  get noticed by the editor and land that assignment

2)      To build and maintain a good, on-going relationship with the editor

3)      To build and maintain as a professional, reliable and easy-going writer

4)      To laugh. Seriously, some writer behavior will make you laugh.

*

Some Editor Pet Peeves- Inspired by Editors Unleashed

–          Queries with grammar mistakes and/or typos

–          Queries  that show that the writer has no idea about the magazine’s target audience

–          Queries that are far too long or far too short

–          Queries that are vague

–          Generic queries that could be sent to any magazine and yet would appeal to none

–           Queries that have the magazine’s and/or the editor’s name wrong

….

I’m sure there are more, but you get the point. While some of these are very obvious and takes a little effort on the writer’s part to get rid of them, getting the idea just right can be very tricky. To craft a query that is interesting, engaging and with a slant that hasn’t been done before is a challenge writers face all the time. But by paying attention to the tips in the book, we can transform a frustrating challenge into an activity that comes naturally to us. and getting more and better assignments as a result.

 

Editors, are your experiences with writers?

Writers, how are you managing the querying process I’d love to read your experiences, both positive and negative.

 Recommended Reading:

7 Great Query Letter Resources: A List of (E-)Books, Articles and Blog Links

  10 Things You Need to Do After You Sent That Awesome Query Letter

Filed Under: E-Book Reviews, Recommended Resources Tagged With: editors, editors unleashed, how to handle a writing assignment, how to work with editors, how to write a query, linda formichelli, query writing, query writing resources, query writing tips, the renegade writer, writer-editor relationships, writers, writers and editors, writing

Write Great Fiction Dialogue with Gloria Kempton

Posted on January 31, 2012 Written by Pinar Tarhan

Write Great Fiction Dialogue-Gloria Kempton
Image via amazon

 

This Writer’s Relationship with Dialogue

I love writing dialogue. In fact, I love it so much that I only started writing a novel this year, at the age of 27 (I’ve been writing since I was 9). So despite being in love with writing, it never occurred to me to try writing a novel because I had thought that only people who could (and would) write pages of narrative got published.

It was a misguided belief, but I blame it all on my dad’s library, which was full of international bestsellers that reeked of unbearably long and detailed narratives. Of course as I grew up, I discovered a lot of bestselling writers who found the perfect narrative/dialogue ratio, as well writers whose narrative flowed so well it read like juicy dialogue.

But despite finding writers whose books I could read hundreds of pages from in one sitting, I still doubted myself. Because I like dialogue so much, I preferred writing plays over stories, and screenplays over novels.

And yet the dream of being published, seeing my book printed and on the shelves, stayed with me. And with the inspiration I got from authors like Sophie Kinsella and Shari Low, I decided to just go for it.

I love the works of Kinsella and Low because they create fun characters, interesting plots, and hilariously authentic romantic comedies. OK, call it modern romance, chicklit, escapism….whatever. I love reading those kinds of stories, as well as creating them.

But I still had my doubts. Because unlike what Kinsella usually does, my heroine is not the heart of the story. And I didn’t want a first person story written in present tense. Because the story belongs to my male protagonist as much as the female. And despite having a lot in common, they have distinctly different personalities. They are also established professionals. So I have to adjust my tone every time I switch point of view. And guess what? I am writing with multiple viewpoints.

Why I Bought Writing Great Fiction

I needed some serious help. I didn’t want my characters to sound the same. I didn’t want any boring or unauthentic lines coming out of my characters’ mouths. I also didn’t want my story to look like it is all dialogue. I also had questions about formatting…Then I stumbled upon Gloria Kempton’s Write Great Fiction – Dialogue on Writer’s Digest’s shop.

I’ve been studying the book for a couple of months, and applying its tips on my book. I´ll be going whenever I get stuck, and I’ll also use it for editing and improving my manuscript.  And here is why this is one of the best resources:

What It Offers:

  • Lots of dialogue samples from a large variety of published and successful books
  • What to pay attention when you are writing dialogue (including its relationship with narrative and action)
  • What not to do
  • Lot of tips and exercises
  • Formatting your dialogue
  • How to know if your dialogue is working
  • How not to get carried away with fancy words and useless adverbs
  • Knowing your characters’ personality type, and writing accordingly
  • And a lot more.

The Book’s Language

One of my pet peeves is people who don’t practice what they preaches. But luckily Kempton isn’t one of them, as her tone throughout the whole book is while authorative, it is also fun, conversational and personal.

You know you can trust her advice (not just because her book was published by Writer’s Digest), but also it is clear that she has used her own advice and it works. How else would it be enjoyable to study a non-fiction book without wanting to put it away?

Filed Under: E-Book Reviews Tagged With: dialogue writing exercises, Gloria Kempton, how to write dialogue, how to write fiction, how to write good dialogue, write a novel, write fiction, write great fiction, writers digest books, writing a novel, writing dialogue, writing dialogue first novel, writing fiction

E-book Review: Crafting Unforgettable Characters by K.M. Weiland

Posted on December 24, 2011 Written by Pinar Tarhan

creating-unforgettable-characters
Cover image via kmweiland.com

 

Like any writer who is passionately and desperately addicted to the act of writing, I love devouring good resources on any aspect of writing, be it fiction or non-fiction. Author K.M. Weiland, whose blog (Wordplay) I discovered while I was going through WritetoDone’s list of Top 10 Blogs for Writers. I can’t say I fell in l love with all of the blogs while some appealed more to me than the others. Weiland’s blog was one of my favorites.

 

Here’s what I liked about Weiland’s blog:

  •  It is on blogger, so it goes to prove that you can actually have a well-structured, monetized blog even on a free platform. Yes, a hosted blog has its advantages (but also its disadvantages) and her blog looks informative, concise and it possesses all the right widgets. It actually inspired me to take a second look and revitalize my blogger blogs.

 

P.S. This is not to say she doesn’t own her domain name and run a website under it. You can check her website at kmweiland.com

 

  • She offers articles and video. And with her video, she also offers the video transcript so she appeals to different types of readers at the same time. So you can learn a lot about blogging just hanging around her website and observing.

 

  • You can browse through her blog posts and pretty much find good tips on whatever problem you are trying to tackle. Instead of generalizing, she has gone to the trouble of giving pros and cons, and examples of good results. One my favorite posts is Most Common Mistakes Series: Are Your Flashbacks Flashy or Flabby? as I am working on a novel with a great deal of flashbacks.  Most writers advice against flashbacks, suggesting that only a selected few can actually pull it off.

 

Well, that is just picking the easy route and generalizing. And guess what, I got the guidance I needed from Weiland’s post without feeling depressed about my choices for my story.

 

Here’s what I liked about the e-book

–          When she talks about creating unforgettable characters, she doesn’t just talk about novels, but she also gives examples from movies. As a movie fan, this makes the advice more memorable to me.

 

As a writer, I appreciated the fact that she used different examples from different story media- this makes her writing down-to-hearth, diverse and fun.

 

–          Just because she talked about Jason Bourne, it doesn’t mean she doesn’t quote from William Shakespeare. Or Graham Greene. Or Joyce Carol Oates. You get the idea.

 

–          She has included fun and challenging writing prompts that will help not only with our characters, but our plots and future stories as well.

 

–          She has given examples of truly great characters, and the reasons for why we love and remember them. If you have seen/read the work mentioned, you want to go back to it. If you haven’t, you’ve just found something substantial to study. And it makes you visualize.

 

–          You will find at least a couple of useful tips, regardless of what you write, and how your mind works.

 

–          It includes a comprehensive set of questions for you to ask your character.

 

–          It talks about the relationship between theme and character and it also gives guidelines on picking the characters’ names and jobs.

 

and more.

 

 

If I had paid for this book, I definitely wouldn’t have regretted it. This pdf will stay on my laptop, and will be referred to as I keep creating fiction.

 

I’m off to interviewing my characters now. How’s your character creation going?

Filed Under: E-Book Reviews Tagged With: character creating tips, crafting unforgettable characters, creating memorable characters, fiction writing tips, k.m. weiland, km weiland, tips for writers, top blogs for writers, wordplay, wordplay blog, writetodone, writing fiction, writing tips

Cure Your Writer’s Block with Tristan Higbee’s 101 Ways to Battle Blogger’s Block

Posted on August 16, 2011 Written by Pinar Tarhan

 

101waystobattlebloggersblock
Cover of 101 Ways to Battle Blogger's Block. Image via bloggingbookshelf.com

  Where This Freelancer Has Trouble

I guess I am like most writers. My brain never stops thinking about my next article, next blog post, next idea for a fictional story…

But I’m most comfortable finding ideas for and writing my blog posts. For me, freedom enables fun and creativity.

And a creative writer who’s having fun is usually a productive writer. But I do get stuck finding slants when I am pitching the other magazines/websites/blogs.

Most of the time, no two publications are ever identical. So having to come up with multiple (workable) ideas for each publication can be extremely frustrating.

And between all the publications, their topics and guidelines, I sometimes find myself unable to generate ideas productively.

You know you are in trouble when you can’t find any ideas that excite and/or entertain you. How can I convince an editor when I am not all that enthused myself? After all, it feels amazing when other people want to publish your stuff. The bad thing is, you are competing with many other freelancers.

Most Inspirational/Creativity Books Aren’t Helpful

I recently threw away a book on creativity, because its tips felt so abstract. And most books that are supposed to help you unleash your creativity only add to your block. Or they only offer stuff that you have heard before. Or they don’t appeal to your tastes/personality/mindset.

Why Tristan’s 101 Ways to Battle Blogger’s Block Rocks:

–          You can use all his suggestions for all sorts of writing.

–          They are fun to read and apply.

–          Some of the tips are familiar, but you probably didn’t see them presented in a neat, concise package. It is only 28 pages.

–          It’s free.

–          It comes with 101 tips, so there are bound to be some stuff you haven’t tried before.

–          Sometimes it offers contrasting tips, so you can get even more experimental to see what works better for you.  

 

Some of My Favorite Tips: (The details are in the book)

  • Where were you X time ago?
  • Look at your photo albums.
  • Pick a (well-known). story/song/… and roll with it
  • Title a post after a song.

When I was reading his e-book for the first time, and saw this last tip, I pushed the next button on my mp3 player (which was on Shuffle mode), and I got Kansas’ Carry On My Wayward Son – a classic rock number (that is also a trademark song on the mystery/thriller/horror show Supernatural).

Think what I can do with it:

Carry On My Wayward Blogger/Freelancer/Writer….

Don’t we often feel wayward with how much we are supposed to do to reach our goals?

Who knows what other titles can bring to the table, or how many more ideas can be spun off this song? If nothing else, you can just relax, close your eyes and enjoy the song.

After all taking a break, is incidentally, one of the ways Tristan is suggesting. And this is only one of the 101 ways. ,

*

Tristan blogs on Blogging Bookshelf, a blog about “blogging,info products and internet business.” You can learn more about him here, and access his free e-books (whose topics range from getting noticed in your niche to getting ideas for books) here.  Yes, I downloaded them all. You can’t always find that much fun stuff in the same place.

Related Posts Plugin for WordPress, Blogger...

Filed Under: E-Book Reviews, Recommended Resources Tagged With: 101 ways to battle bloggers block, blogging, blogging bookshelf, cure writers blog, finding new ideas, overcome writers block, resources for writers, tristan higbee, writers block, writing, writing resources

  • « Previous Page
  • 1
  • …
  • 6
  • 7
  • 8
  • 9
  • 10
  • Next Page »

Blogroll

  • My Entertainment Blog

My Other Blogs

  • Beauty, Fitness & Style for the Fun-Loving Gal
  • Dating & Relationships in the 21st Century

Categories

  • Author Interviews
  • Author news and coverage
  • Blogging
  • Book Launches and Excerpts
  • Book News and Author Interviews
  • Book Recommendations
  • Book Reviews
  • Career Management for Writers
  • E-Book Reviews
  • Fiction Writing
  • Fictional Writers: Writer Characters in Movies, TV Series and Books
  • Inspiration and Motivation
  • Marketing
  • Marketing Fiction
  • Movie and TV Series Recommendations
  • Novel Reviews
  • Paying Markets-Web and Print
  • Productivity & Time Management
  • Recommended Resources
  • Reviews for Tools and Devices
  • Romance
  • screenwriting
  • Self-publishing
  • Story Conflicts
  • Website & Blog Reviews
  • Writer Tools
  • Writing
  • Writing Tools
  • Writing Updates

Copyright © 2026 · Focus Pro Theme on Genesis Framework · WordPress · Log in

This website uses cookies to improve your experience. We'll assume you're ok with this, but you can opt-out if you wish.Accept Reject Read More
Privacy & Cookies Policy

Privacy Overview

This website uses cookies to improve your experience while you navigate through the website. Out of these, the cookies that are categorized as necessary are stored on your browser as they are essential for the working of basic functionalities of the website. We also use third-party cookies that help us analyze and understand how you use this website. These cookies will be stored in your browser only with your consent. You also have the option to opt-out of these cookies. But opting out of some of these cookies may affect your browsing experience.
Necessary
Always Enabled
Necessary cookies are absolutely essential for the website to function properly. This category only includes cookies that ensures basic functionalities and security features of the website. These cookies do not store any personal information.
Non-necessary
Any cookies that may not be particularly necessary for the website to function and is used specifically to collect user personal data via analytics, ads, other embedded contents are termed as non-necessary cookies. It is mandatory to procure user consent prior to running these cookies on your website.
SAVE & ACCEPT