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Extreme Makeovers, Fiction Edition: From Younger to A Change Would Do You Good

Posted on October 21, 2025 Written by Pinar Tarhan

 

Change is hard. Even if you’re the one who wants to make a change, life often gets in the way with a vengeance. Health problems, financial issues, time crunches, people around you being unsupportive, fear, and a whole lot more work against you, preventing you from making those changes as fast as you’d like.

Then there are the changes you didn’t ask for but life threw at you anyway: relationships failing, friends drifting apart, clients going in a different direction…It’s even harder to adapt to changes you didn’t see coming because this time you have to deal with the loss of what was and create motivation out of thin air. Yikes.

So it’s always good to have some external inspiration nudging us in the right direction, making us feel not alone. Below are 3 TV series and 2 novels that prove extreme changes, as challenging as they are, can be the best things that happen to us.

And the good news is, the changes you want to or have to make will probably not be as wild!

Younger (2015-2021) starring Sutton Foster

40-year-old Liza’s (Sutton Foster) life needs a reset button asap: divorced with a daughter in college, Liza wants to get back to her previous career in publishing. Problem? No one is willing to hire her at her age with that long gap in her resume. That’s when her best friend/artist Maggie (Debbie Mazar) comes up with a radical life makeover plan: Change Liza’s makeup/hair/wardrobe so that she can look and act like a 27-year-old.

It works! With her old “soul”, maturity, wisdom beyond her years, and knowledge of books, she finally gets a job. However, bumps occur when she develops a close friendship with an actual 20-something co-worker and crushes on a 20-something tattoo artist (Nico Tortorella) who believes she is around his age. What makes things even more complicated is that she also bonds with her late-40s handsome boss (Peter Hermann) who is not happy he’s attracted to someone so much younger…

Younger is a brilliant and funny show full of heart. It takes down stereotypes and agism, while it makes us grapple with a solid dilemma: What would you do if you were forced to choose between honesty and happiness in all areas of your life?

 

Rookie (2018-…. ) starring Nathan Fillion

 

When 40-something John Nolan (Nathan Fillion) faces a life-or-death situation after his divorce, pursuing his dream to be a police officer seems like a no-brainer. With his only child in college, if he doesn’t pursue this now, when will he?

But being the oldest rookie in the LAPD won’t be easy, especially with his superior seemingly out to get him. But as he forms close friendships with younger rookies Jackson and Lucy, he knows he made the right call. And while the training officers are skeptical, he proves to everyone that life experience, empathy, and emotional intelligence are priceless skills, and he is an asset to the force rather than a liability.

 

Matlock (2024-…) starring Kathy Bates

 

Madeleine Matlock is a 70-something attorney who’s dying to get back into law after years spent raising a family. She uses her invisibility and people’s constant underestimation of her as a superpower and manages to land a job at a prestigious law firm.

But unbeknownst to her new colleagues and bosses, she has a big secret: She lost her adult daughter to opioid addiction. Raising her preteen grandson with her husband, she has infiltrated to expose those people who enable the drug company’s distribution and marketing.

As lines blur and friendships grow, Madeline will have to keep outsmarting everyone.

 

Book Series: A Change Would Do You Good – Romcom, Contemporary Fiction

A Change Would Do You Good is a romcom novel where the main character continues to inspire me to this day.

Months after her boyfriend dies and her friends move to another country, Janie’s desperate to feel good again. She gives her life an extreme makeover: She moves to another city, complete with a different car and wardrobe. The good news? The chaotic new people in her life provide just the distraction she needs. The bad news? She is definitely not ready for the attraction she feels for her surfer neighbor Kevin, who just might be the hottest and most insensitive person she has ever met. But is Kevin really only good for something casual, or is he also starting to feel something that he can’t ignore?

While Janie has the money and good health to make the changes she does, it still takes a lot of guts to make such big changes. Instead of her blossoming career in LA as a fashion designer, she opts to work for a much smaller agency in San Diego. She leaves her loving family and other friends behind. She goes from the peace and quiet of her house to an apartment building filled with quirky neighbors. Even as an extrovert, she struggles to adjust to her new reality, especially since she is still grieving the loss of the wonderful man she was in a fantastic, loving relationship with.

A Change Would Do You Good is the first book in the A Change Would Do You Good romcom trilogy. And as Janie deals with her grief and makes a new life for herself with new friends, the second and third book continue with her and her friends & neighbors’ adventures. You can check out the first two books on Amazon. I’m currently working on the final book.

You can read this ensemble fun as an e-book and a paperback. It’s also free to read on Kindle Unlimited.

Book Series: Nellie’s Fire Nehalennia’s Daughters Book 1 – A Paranormal Women’s Fiction Fantasy

Nellie Jansen has a good life in the Netherlands. She loves her job, her partner Bram, and their daughter. She’s not looking to change anything. Until she discovers she is a powerful fire witch, and she will have to get used to her powers, learn about her heritage, and save the world in the process.

If you love your strong female protagonists who also tend to be supernaturally powerful and will do everything to save those she loves, you’re going to love this. And if Nellie can cope with the monumental changes thrown her way, then there is hope for all of us.

 

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How do you feel about change? Did you watch or read any of these works? Let me know in the comments!

Filed Under: Book Recommendations, Inspiration and Motivation, Movie and TV Series Recommendations Tagged With: a change would do you good, A Change Would Do You Good romcom, books about reinventing your life, fictional inspiration for real-life change, inspirational stories about second chances, life reinvention after 40, TV shows about starting over

Life is Stranger Than Fiction: Why You Can and Should Write Freely

Posted on August 18, 2023 Written by Pinar Tarhan

Image via Mollyroselee from Pixabay.

 

I’ve been creating fiction for a long time. Like, for over two decades now. (I started early.)

While I cared about laws of physics since I wrote romantic comedies and dramas set in the real world, I left everything else to my imagination. Now, there was logic involved.

 

When Greg drove a Jaguar in my romcom novel A Change Would Do You Good, I made sure the audience knew he was a star in his field and at his company. He was the boss’s favorite and made a lot of money. So no one questioned his living standards.

But no matter how much reality you infuse into your fiction, someone will offer a piece of unwarranted criticism, which is fine.

Not all of the unwarranted criticisms come from a mean place. Your readers have different life experiences. Not to mention, our levels of suspension of disbelief differ. When I watch a movie/series with teenagers, I am fine with young adults acting younger than their age. I mean, who is going to say Michael J. Fox can’t/couldn’t pass for a high schooler in Back to the Future? Come on, I dare ya. 🙂

Still, not all Friends lovers (and haters) are convinced Monica could afford her Manhattan apartment. To that, I say:

  • Rent control
  • Occasionally great-paying jobs as a chef
  • Upper-middle-class parents
  • Happy-to-lend-money brother
  • Well-earning bestie (Chandler)

Those five points are mentioned in the show. At this point, if you don’t believe she could survive living there, maybe you aren’t into fiction.

One time, a friend reading A Change Would Do You Good (the story featuring our Jaguar-driving friend Greg from above) told me everyone in the story was good-looking, and that didn’t seem believable.

All my recurring characters are either really hot or attractive in their own way. Except for Linda in the beginning, because she has let herself go. However, she also gives herself a makeover and a confidence boost. And don’t worry, there’s no glass removal involved. Just a woman dressing better and losing the extra weight (and by that, I mean her incompatible boyfriend).

What are the odds of so many people being attractive? Without context, it sounds like a writer just pulling stuff out of her butt, I’ll admit.:))

But here’s the context:

This story is set in California. Some characters are from L.A., where there’s a lot of pressure to look good. I’ve been to Santa Barbara and Los Angeles. I don’t remember seeing a lot of average-looking people.

I looked fantastic too. I made an effort. It was my first time being abroad, and it was Cali, so I wasn’t just going to roll out of bed and not care.

Here’s even more context:

Janie, the main character, is a fashion designer. She knows how to look good.

Kevin, the male main character and Janie’s love interest is a pro surfer. Sports is his idea of fun. He is hot. And yes, it matters to the plot. And remember, this is a romcom drama. How many romcoms have you read or watched where the leads are just meh?

Kevin’s best friends are surfers and they also take amazing care of themselves. This is also not just a superficial afterthought either. This is a tight group of people who are extremely competitive at everything, and they have made a career in the one thing they love most in the world. They are healthy, successful, confident, and radiant. It’d be unusual if they weren’t considered hot.

(If you are wondering how such a happy group will have trouble in life… Well, Kevin has never been in love. He doesn’t even believe in romantic love. Janie’s grieving the death of the guy she thought she’d be with forever. So when they meet, sparks fly, and world views clash… So, don’t worry. The conflicts are strong with this neighbors to lovers/haters to lovers duo.)

Greg is a psychiatrist. He cares deeply about mental and physical health. Just doing what’s good for your body and soul alone will make a big difference in how good you look.

Ben is literally a model.

But what are the odds of them coming together and all the chaos?

Anytime you put an ensemble together and have them experience hilarious (mis)adventures, someone is bound to ask: But what are the odds?

It’s a great and valid question. Luckily, I’ve got the answer for you:

Highly likely, because life is stranger than fiction.

When I was in college, I did two terms abroad in Halden, Norway as an international student. Here’s a very short snippet of what life was like:

  • Once, a German neighbor opened the door with a chainsaw in hand. (He’s a great guy. We were a weird bunch.)
  • The neighbors of a Chinese student didn’t like his housekeeping (or behavior), so they put his bike on the roof of their two-story house.
  • My Austrian neighbor hated my Hungarian neighbor’s kitchen habits, so he threw all of his kitchen stuff out of the window.
  • My Russian and Norwegian neighbors, both with notoriously bad memories, met, forgot meeting, and introduced themselves to each other again after a year. They didn’t notice each other for months, even though they lived in a small two-story house with just 6 other people.
  • My German neighbor with the chainsaw once carved a wooden stake for me in 5 minutes because I wanted to go to the Halloween party as Buffy.
  • All the guys came together and skied off the roofs. For fun.

That’s real life for you. So any time I’m tempted to dismiss a storyline as unlikely, I think back and laugh.

 

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Life is, and probably will always be stranger than fiction. Just think about what we have been through in the world in the last 3 years.

By all means, mind your plot holes. Check your facts. But write what you want. Because chances are, stuff way weirder already happened.

Filed Under: Inspiration and Motivation, Writing Tagged With: a change would do you good, realism in novels, stranger than fiction, writing fiction, writing realistic stories

Cover Reveal for A Change Would Do You Better and An Excerpt

Posted on June 8, 2023 Written by Pinar Tarhan

 

The day for the A Change Would Do You Better launch is drawing close! It’s time I reveal the cover on the blog and share an excerpt from the book!

A bit about A Change Would Do You Better

  • A Change Would Do You Better is the second book in the A Change Would Do You Good series.
  • A Change Would Do You Better follows mostly the same characters, and starts some months after the first book ends.
  • Both books are set in San Diego with some scenes in Los Angeles.
  • Both books are short (fewer than 50,000 words), fun romcoms with ensemble casts. When I say ensemble, I mean it. There are many scenes and storylines that don’t involve main character Janie.
  • Men also have been known to enjoy my books. Think more Friends and much less The Notebook. 🙂 (Obviously, Friends is funnier. I’ll dare say my books are more romantic, though.)
  • A Change Would Do You Good (the first book) has more drama because main character Janie is still trying to get over the death of her boyfriend and Michelle’s struggling with agoraphobia.
  • Change is a huge theme in the entire series, as well as making your career dreams come true, power of strong friendships, and finding The One.
  • The books are not clean romances. While sex scenes aren’t explicit, they are either there or implied. There might also be drinking, drugs (first book), and swearing.
  • Both books end happily ever after.

You can buy A Change Would Do You Good on Amazon. E-book’s currently $0.99 until the launch of the sequel. Paperback version is available, and it’s free to read on Kindle Unlimited.

Here’s what a few readers had to say about A Change Would Do You Good:

“A great read to add to your suitcase if you are heading somewhere hot, but also a warming romance to read if you are at home. I read this book a while ago and thought I’d already reviewed it, but couldn’t see it here, so I’ve added it again. A real page-turner full of sunshine, wonderful characters and thoughtful.”

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“I loved this story and all of the wonderful characters in it. The author has given them all such unique personalities and the way that they interact with each other in this tiny apartment complex will have readers laughing until they cry. With so many great people, it is hard to know who is going to be a favorite or who to root for more. The story has a happy ending but will leave the reader wanting more stories from this fascinating dwelling place. I almost want to live there myself! Such a hoot.”

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“I mean lighthearted in the way a rom com can only bring you peace. This was a great read for me, the characters were great and the dialogue between them was amazing. Believe it or not the characters were very well scripted. The sense of friendship is something that brought me so much happiness, because who are we without our friends?”

 

A Change Would Do You Better Excerpt

Chapter 1

 

San Diego

 

Twenty minutes before the party, Janie examined herself in front of the purple floor mirror next to her dresser. She smiled as she felt Kevin’s hand on her waist.

He put his cheek next to hers and admired her cobalt blue slim mini dress sparkling with sequins. It revealed almost no cleavage, but it showed quite a bit of her toned long legs. She’d paired it with elegant tanned stilettos that weren’t too high.

“Doesn’t it piss off the models when the fashion designer is hotter than them?” He said, wrapping his hands around her waist. She had a pretty good idea where his head was at, and she didn’t mind one bit.

She turned to face him. “You are looking quite dashing yourself.”

He did. He looked sexy in anything, and his combo of dark blue jeans and a white T-shirt under a well-fitted blue cotton jacket was no different. She traced her hand through his long, sun-bleached dark blond waves. Taking her hand mid-air with a mischievous glint in his eye, he kissed her. As they both gave their all to the kiss, he made sure they’d land on the bed.

As he lay down, he swiftly pulled her towards him.  She let out a laugh and mentally congratulated herself on having picked a wrinkle-proof dress, one of her own designs. She knew her audience. She bit her bottom lip as he came on top and kissed her neck, avoiding any teeth action that could form a hickey. As much as she wanted him, she had to put a stop to this.

She took his face in her hands, grinned, and rolled them both over so she was now on top. “We’re going to be late.”

He placed his hand on her thigh and seductively slid his hand upwards. “You helped them find a house. You helped them unpack, and you helped with the guest list. You can be a little late.” He had a point there…

After a long, breathless make-out session where a lot of hand action was involved, she held his hands and pinned them down on the bed.

“Except, for what I planned for us tonight, babe,” she said in a purposefully sultry tone, “we need a long time.”

That did the trick. He shot her a sexy grin, rolled over her once more and leaped to his feet. Then he gave her his hand and helped her up. “On the other hand, Andy and Sarah are dear, dear friends of yours, and they would want us there sooner than later,” Kevin said.

“Thank you,” she said as she smoothed down her dress, but she was having a harder time with self-control than she let on. She had played the part of the considerate friend/cool-headed party invitee well enough, but it wasn’t just him who couldn’t take his hands off her. She was positively glowing with happiness, and she knew it showed.

She absolutely loved that they were still like this nine months into their relationship. Considering he was her downstairs neighbor in the same building, they practically lived together. And yet… well, she’d knock on wood if she were even slightly superstitious.

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Ben slept in his bed soundly. He was face down, in his towel, and under the covers. He had partied from yesterday evening into the early morning light today. After a hearty breakfast at a diner with his fellow model friends, he had come home, taken a shower, and floated into dreamland pretty much immediately.

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Janie and Kevin crossed the hall from her apartment and rang Ben’s bell. As Kevin knocked on the door and yelled his name, Janie kept calling his cell. Finally, a sleepy and confused Ben appeared at the door in his towel, with his hair all shaggy. He was trying to figure out why his two neighbors/friends were standing in front of him, all dressed up.

“You know, some men can pull off bed hair,” Janie said to Kevin, while still looking at Ben with a mock critical eye.

“He’s not one of them,” Kevin said, squinting.

“He’s not.”

“What’re you…” Ben tried to ask.

“But usually, that hair isn’t literally just getting out of bed and doing nothing,” Janie said.

“I think you’re supposed to at least put a hand through it or something,” Kevin agreed. Janie and Kevin were entertaining themselves with Ben’s confusion.

“Shit! The party!”

“There he is,” Kevin said.

“Give me a minute.” Ben rushed inside without even closing the door.

“Sixty seconds, and I’m gone,” Kevin called after him.

“That’s fair,” Janie said.

It made sense that they went to the party together since they lived in the same building, but she didn’t intend to wait long for Ben either.

Inside his bedroom, Ben hastily put on dark jeans and the first clean and wrinkle-free shirt he found. He sprayed his armpits with deodorant and almost fell down in the attempt to wear his sneakers. Just as he was about to dash to the door, he remembered his hair and sneaked a look at his dresser mirror. Yikes! They weren’t pulling his leg for nothin’!

He pushed his head forward, shook his hair up a bit, and looked up. Yep! Now he looked like he came out of a shampoo commercial shoot. He didn’t know if he got his lush and easy-to-style hair from the Cuban or German side of the family, but he thanked his ancestors just the same.

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Ben emerged with two more seconds to go.

“Not bad,” Janie approved.

“Can we get some coffee?” Ben asked as he closed and locked his door. Janie ignored him and walked ahead.

“What? There are like a hundred coffee shops on the way.”

Kevin ignored him too and caught up with Janie.

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Linda positioned herself in front of her laptop ready to go at a moment’s notice. She wore a figure-hugging black knee-length skirt and rainbow stripe tube top. She’d combined them with strappy flat red pumps, which were the same shade as the red in the rainbow stripe.

She had done her long, dyed-black hair in a loose but gorgeous ponytail. She was making the most of the video chat with her musician boyfriend Rick before they left for the stage.

“It’s not fair that you look like that while I’m miles away,” Rick said, currently calling in from Seattle. They’d be in White Center two nights later.

He talked on his phone from a corner sofa in their room backstage. His long brown hair had been blow-dried and looked fantastic. No lie; it was fun dating a guy whose hair was as pretty and well-cared for as hers.

Linda grinned. “Yeah, I wanted you to feel the pain.”

“I’m so counting down the days.”

“Same,” Linda enthused. Rick was coming home in less than two weeks from his first tour with his band, and she couldn’t wait. “Just how tired are you right now?” She asked him.

“Not the best pep talk, babe,” Rick teased. “Plus, I can ask you the same thing about training several groups of people on the same day. Touring is not more tiring than Zumba. I know, I tested.”

Linda chuckled. “You did Zumba? On tour?”

“I missed you. I needed cardio. So, I watched one of your class videos you sent me. And I’m telling you, even watching it increased my heart rate.”

“Was it the moves, or were you excited to see me?”

“We better not get the conversation there two minutes before I take the stage,” Rick said.

“Oops. My bad. Go and rock their pants off!”

“Will do.” He sent her an air kiss and a killer smile before disconnecting the call.

And as expected, her phone rang. “Hi, Greg. On my way.” The man’s punctuality was unrivaled.

She got up and turned off her computer. Grabbing her clutch from the table and her black lace cardigan from the back of the chair, she whistled as she left the room.

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Linda got in her best friend’s black Jaguar and shut the door. “Rick says hello.”

Greg flashed a wide smile with his perfect teeth. “It can’t be a coincidence you got to video chat with him in that outfit.”

“Of course not. He can’t think I sit around in my sweatpants missing him,” Linda said, and Greg smirked.   “Fine. He knows I miss him, but the sweatpants stay a secret,” she said with a glint in her eye.

“Fair enough.” He hit the gas.

“It kind of feels both weird and comfortable going to a party where we know like eighty percent of the guests,” Linda mused.

“The party is to welcome Sarah and Andy to their new city and help them meet new people,” Greg reminded her. Sarah and Andy were Janie’s oldest friends and had relocated from Vancouver to San Diego two weeks ago. “Expanding your social circle or mine wasn’t probably on Janie’s agenda.”

It might be so, but expanding Greg’s social circle was definitely a part of Linda’s. “I also invited some of my favorite people from the gym,” she said.

“Fellow trainers?”

“Trainers. Clients.” Linda could see Greg sensed where this was going and didn’t like it one bit.

“Let me guess. They are all single pretty women.”

“And what do you have against single pretty women?” Linda asked, feigning innocence.

“Linda!”

“There will be single eligible men at the party.”

“Linda.”

She finally decided to spill the beans. “These women are nice, fun, and accomplished. And they deserve to meet men who are nice, fun, and accomplished.”

Greg sighed.

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Los Angeles

 

Ian listened to pulsating fast music from his phone in his UCLA dorm room and absent-mindedly tossed clothes into the duffel bag on the bed. His ringtone interrupted the music. He checked the caller ID: Mom. He rejected the call and kept packing for the summer break.

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San Diego

 

That night, Michelle and her boyfriend Adam toured the charming beachfront house for the second time this week. They had seen it first in daylight. Adam had fallen in love with the house, but he didn’t try to persuade her. She was the one buying, and she appreciated he wasn’t rushing her.

She looked at her phone and her face fell. Ian wasn’t answering again. Adam understood what happened from her expression and gently gave her shoulder a squeeze.

Adam and Michelle had rekindled their romance a few months after Adam reentered her life, and Michelle had beaten agoraphobia for good. She had recently put her apartment in Kevin and Janie’s building on the market and was looking for a fresh start.

She had stayed with Adam at his smart and customized condo during the process, but she wanted a place of her own. As much as they loved spending time together, she longed to enjoy a house of her own with floor-to-ceiling windows and loads of outdoor space after six long years of being trapped in an apartment. Said apartment was a fancy and roomy two-bedroom in a fine neighborhood, but the majority of her memories were accompanied by anxiety, panic attacks, and extreme discomfort. She couldn’t even use the oversized balcony, which could be counted as a room in its own right.

She hadn’t bonded with or even met most of her neighbors, which was a shame because Ian thought they were interesting and cool. Still, the prospect of fun neighbors didn’t appeal to her nearly as much as the fresh start.

When the realtor finally stopped singing the beach house’s praises, Michelle had missed most of her speech.

“It’s lovely,” Adam offered.

“Isn’t it?” She turned to Michelle. “What do you think? Isn’t it gorgeous 24/7?”

“I don’t know… It’s quite wonderful, but I’m still not sure.”

“You’ve been on the market for a while. You know houses like this are snatched up before you can blink.”

Michelle nodded absent-mindedly.

The realtor walked them out through the porch and Michelle breathed in the ocean air.

“I’ll give you a couple of more minutes and let the view seduce you,” the realtor said. She stepped away from the couple and got to work on her tablet.

“This house is gorgeous,” Michelle said.

“But you wish Ian could see it.”

“I mean… It’ll be his after I die.”

“Come on, now,” Adam objected.

He was right. They were healthy, fit, and only in their forties. She shouldn’t be talking about wills and stuff just yet.

Michelle continued, “You know what I mean. Plus, obviously, it will still be also his home when I’m around, and I want us to spend quality time together. It’d be great to find a place he also loved.”

“I hear you, but no one can dislike this view,” Adam said. This made Michelle smile. “You deserve a fantastic place. And I’m sure he will love what you pick.” He put his arms around her waist, and she snuggled closer.

She smiled and hoped he was right about Ian. “OK. Let’s do this. This is the one.”

She had a sneaking suspicion her young adult son’s lack of communication frequency for the past few months hadn’t been just about being a busy student who transferred to UCLA at the beginning of the term. Luckily, she knew the right person to get the intel from.

*

Andy found his wife Sarah in the kitchen looking at the couple kissing in the corner of their balcony.

“You know it’s a good party when you have people making out,” Andy observed, which made Sarah sneer.  “Okay, you know it’s a party,” he corrected himself.

She drank a glass of water to take a breather and then headed to the sumptuous living room alongside Andy. Kissing couples or not, the party was a success so far. The music played at an optimum volume, allowing people to dance and chat however they wanted.

The two waitresses hired for the occasion did a solid job of keeping everyone’s glasses full and their stomachs sweet with the mini chocolate desserts that Sarah baked.

All tables and countertops were filled to the brim with salty snacks including chips, various kinds of sliced cheese, nuts, and biscuits.

Sarah’s eyes searched for Janie and found her at the mercy of Kevin’s dance moves, which he was practicing as Greg showed them on the happy but slightly giddy Linda.

Janie laughed heartily when she and Kevin pulled off a tricky turn and lift. Kevin was a capable dancer, but this was the first time he was trying this move. Greg and Linda applauded, and Janie and Kevin responded with a dramatic bow.

Sarah was happy they were having fun. But she couldn’t help but let out a sigh.

“Worried about the video?” Andy asked.

“Aren’t you?” She asked as scanned the crowded room. Being the hostess was somewhat taking her mind off their secret, but it wasn’t enough.

“Are you kidding? I’m tempted to never give it to Janie,” Andy admitted.

“That’s not an option, is it? Lenny would haunt us for all eternity.”

“I think we can safely assume ghosts don’t exist. He can’t have been too happy about us sitting on the thing for two years.”

Sarah shuddered at the thought of disappointing Lenny, her best friend since birth. Heck, she considered him her brother.

Sarah met Janie in high school after Lenny’s father had whisked his family away from Los Angeles to New York for work.

And she even met her husband Andy through Lenny.

The boys had bonded in college and trained their butts off to become Formula 1 drivers. Sarah reunited with Lenny in LA, where the four of them became inseparable. Janie and Lenny were close friends for a while before they got together.

His sudden and violent death two years ago had shocked them to their very core. They had all lost a big chunk of their souls, really. Sarah had realized she could only ever imagine surviving such a loss in a different country.

Andy, the loving husband that he is, had supported her decision. He had even quit racing just so she wouldn’t worry, even though Lenny hadn’t died during a race. But when you moved abroad a month after your best friend lost her love, leaving her all alone with her pain…you just wouldn’t know how to deliver Lenny’s birthday present to her. Especially considering what it was.

Their well-meaning plan was to give it to her when she was feeling better. But the more they waited, the harder it became. And before they knew it, it had been two whole years.

Andy watched their friend smile and chat with Kevin, Linda, and Greg with a sad smile. “The plan was to wait until she was okay. At least she’s doing great. She’s happy. She has found someone… These thoughts will warm my heart as she disowns us and never talks to us ever again,” he said. “I don’t even want to think how furious she will be.”

Neither did Sarah. She took a deep breath and grabbed two new flutes of champagne from one of the waitresses. She gave one to Andy and chugged a healthy amount from hers. “She’ll kill us. Our bodies will never be found, and we will have deserved it.”

Andy sighed. “Let’s just enjoy tonight.”

“Because we might never get Janie and her new friends back here again?” Sarah completed his sentiment for him. They knew each other too well.

“Kevin seems like a fun dude,” Andy said. “Shame we might never get to bond.”

“OK, this is depressing. Like you said. Let’s enjoy tonight and keep worrying after.”

“Deal,” Andy said.

Together, they approached Janie and smiled as their eyes caught hers. Andy thought how it was a shame he would probably never get to bond with Kevin.

 

End of excerpt

 

Thanks for reading, and stay tuned for the launch date announcement. 🙂

Filed Under: Book Launches and Excerpts, Writing Updates Tagged With: a change would do you better, a change would do you good, a change would do you good romance novel, romance novel, romance novels with ensemble casts, romcom novel

A Change Would Do You Good: The Complete Novel Soundtrack

Posted on January 19, 2022 Written by Pinar Tarhan

Writers often ask each other what they listen to as they write.

While I often don’t listen to music, I will listen to a particular song if that song embodies the mood or even the events of the scene.

And if my characters are listening to a song in a scene, I’ll listen to that song over and over again until I finish writing said scene.

Below is the complete soundtrack to my romcom drama novel A Change Would Do You Good. I listed which chapter the song is mentioned, as well as when/why it plays and which character plays it.

If you like rock music, and in some cases, dance music, check these songs out. If you can, play them as the characters hear them.

Ch 1

Highway to Hell – AC/DC

Janie listens to this as she drives off to her new life.

Ch 4

Four minutes – Madonna and Justin Timberlake feat. Timbaland

This is Ben’s alarm song. He dances to this every…well, afternoon. He’s got the moves.

Ch. 7

All Night – Def Leppard

Denise’s giving one of her legendary parties at her beach house again. She dirty dances to this gem with her hunky date.

My novel isn’t a clean romance, and I’d wager this song alone would disqualify me from the genre even if I tried to write one. 🙂

Sweet Emotion – Aerosmith

A gorgeous stranger puts this song on the jukebox at Denise’s party, and Kevin’s pleased to flirt with someone who shares his taste in rock music.

Ch. 9

Def Leppard – Two Steps Behind

Janie’s housewarming party is going great, but she gets emotional when she hears this come on.

Def Leppard – Rock On

We are still at Janie’s party. Life, and the party, must go on. And so it does with Rock On’s catchy riff.

Fun fact: I was there… A thousand years ago… OK, it wasn’t 1000 years ago. But it was 2006, in Sweden and I saw Def Leppard live at a rock festival. I was in the second room, and I listened to Rock On.

Ch. 10

I Like The Way – BodyRockers

Ben puts this on as he helps Linda move out. Linda isn’t too happy about his celebratory mood.

Two Steps Behind – Def Leppard

Yes, again. This time Janie puts this on purpose while going down the memory lane at Lenny’s apartment. But when it gets too much, she puts on the next song to cope.

Life Goes On – Poison

Ch. 13

21st Century Sha La La La Girl – Def Leppard

Linda basically hears this in her head as she enjoys a shopping spree.

Ch. 15

Nothin’ But A Good Time – Poison

Linda plays this at her new job.

Ch. 16

Don’t Stop Believing – Journey

This is Janie’s ringtone. She gets an emergency work-related call.

Ch. 18

Lay Your Hands on Me – Bon Jovi

Kevin and Janie have to hitchhike, and their “saviors” make one of them drive as they make out in the backseat of the car. Song on the radio? Lay Your Hands on Me.

Surfin’ USA – The Beach Boys

After a huge fight, Kevin and Janie are ready to make up and move on when Kevin’s phone rings. This is the ringtone. On the nose? Yes. Very appropriate and in-character? Also yes. Unfortunately, the caller bears horrible news.

Ch. 20

Blind Faith – Warrant

This song plays during the novel’s last scene.

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Bonus 1: Have you ever needed someone so bad – by Def Leppard

I originally wrote this novel as a TV series. (So yes, a sequel is in the works.)

I printed out each episode and handed it to my friends along with the cassette(s) the songs were on. (I was born in 1984, if the word cassette had you wondering.)

And because it was a TV series, I sometimes added mood songs. So, while a character was in deep thought, I’d name a background song.

I had to cut this song out because I cut the scene, but just because it is no longer in the story, it doesn’t mean the character still doesn’t feel this way.

It played while Kevin was thinking of Janie. He is a secret romantic, that one.

Bonus 2: Marilyn Manson. (Any song you choose by Manson is fine.)

Any time Ashley is partying, you can play a Manson song you like. If Manson’s originals freak you out a bit, how about some rockin’ covers like Sweet Dreams or Tainted Love?

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Check the book on Amazon if the songs got you curious: https://www.amazon.com/Change-Would-Do-You-Good-ebook/dp/B08YJMRN4P   It’s free to read on KU.

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