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The Light Between Oceans Movie: One Magnificent Conflict After the Other

Posted on October 8, 2018 Written by Pinar Tarhan

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Based on the bestselling novel (aff. link) of the same name by M. L. Stedman, The Light Between Oceans (aff. link)is a compelling and humane romantic drama where you feel for all three main characters: Tom, Isabel, and Hannah.

Let’s go over the plot before I delve into conflicts in details and provide necessary spoilers. I strongly recommend watching the movie and/or reading the novel before continuing on to read the post.

As I’m a huge fan of Michael Fassbender (X-Men: First Class, Jane Eyre) and Alicia Vikander (Ex Machina, A Royal Affair), I learned about the novel as I watched the trailer, and since Netflix has the movie, I couldn’t resist. I can’t recommend the movie enough; it is just a thoroughly beautiful and emotional experience. Full disclosure: I cried! I now joke that the movie is so effective that even Fassbender and Vikander couldn’t resist falling in love with each other after meeting on set. Yes, they are married now.

If you have seen the movie recently, you might want to skip right to the conflicts part. If you need your memory refreshed, the plot summary will do just that.

The Light Between Oceans Movie Detailed Plot Summary  – with Spoilers

After Tom (Michael Fassbender) survives World War I, he doesn’t want much to do with people. So he happily takes the job as the lighthouse keeper on a small remote island where he will be the only one living. However, his plans of being by himself don’t work out when he meets Isabelle (Alicia Vikander).

They are both quite taken by each other and marry quickly. What follows is a blissfully happy marriage until Isabel suffers from two miscarriages. Isabelle’s depression is only distracted when a boat washes up ashore carrying a dead man and his newborn baby daughter. Isabelle convinces a reluctant Tom, who wants to do the right thing and report the incident, to let them keep it a secret and pass the baby as their own: After all, not even Isabelle’s parents know about her second miscarriage.

As Tom and Isabelle lovingly take care of the baby girl they named Lucy, Tom’s guilt intensifies as he sees a grieving mother/wife – Hannah (Rachel Weisz) at a memorial gravestone during their gathering for Lucy’s christening. When he reads the stone, he knows it’s Lucy’s real mother. Without Isabelle’s knowledge, he sends Hannah an anonymous note that says that her husband is dead, and the baby is alive, well, and loved. Hannah rushes to the police, but they have nothing to go on.

Tom and Isabelle continue to raise their daughter Lucy. When she is about four, Tom and Isabelle go to an event honoring the lighthouse. As “luck” would have it, it was built with the contributions of Hannah’s rich father. The three meet, Hannah barely keeping it together after meeting a healthy girl the same age her daughter would be. Her sister explains her situation to Tom and Isabelle, which makes Isabelle understand who Hannah is and what they have done.

When Tom tries to convince her to give their daughter to her real mother, Isabelle argues it is best not to shake their girl’s life. A guilt-ridden Tom leaves the toy Lucy had with her when she came on the boat, and this starts the chain of even more complicated events: Police arrest Tom, take the baby from Isabel and give her to Hannah. To protect Isabelle, Tom claims it was his idea. Unfortunately, police also want to accuse Tom of the murder of Hannah’s husband, and Isabel is too mad at her husband to back up his innocence. As Isabel lives with her parents and grieves the loss of Lucy, Hannah tries to cope with an impossible Lucy who misses the parents she knew, and Tom has to deal with both losing his beloved wife and child while being in jail.

When Hannah realizes that Lucy won’t adjust, she offers a deal to Isabel: Help Tom get convicted of murder and be sent away to prison for good. Then she will leave Lucy to Isabel for her child’s happiness. But after Isabel reads Tom’s letter, she can’t live with her own guilt any longer. She admits to her own part and reunites with Tom. This time Hannah isn’t that eager for both of them to rot in prison, for Lucy’s sake. And she knows what it is like to lose a child.

After some time Lucy adjusts to her biological mom and maternal grandfather.

Several decades later, Tom is by Isabel’s hospital bed. We don’t know how long they stayed in prison, if at all. We do know they don’t have kids.

Some time after Isabel’s death, a car drives up to their house. A young woman carrying her baby comes out. It’s Lucy, wanting to catch up with them and introduce her baby. They talk, Tom gives her a letter Isabel wrote, and Lucy asks if she can visit. Tom says he’d like that, they hug, and she leaves.

This post is a part of this blog’s Compelling Conflict series where I analyze the main conflicts in movies to help you (and me) write better fiction.

Conflicts:

The power of the film, in addition to the beautiful cinematography, the powerful direction and acting, comes from how much we root for each character, especially Tom.

While we understand Isabel’s action due to the loss and depression she suffers from, we are introduced to Hannah later in the story. And because Isabel never quite does the right thing when she should, and she only comes to Tom’s rescue at the latest minute, my favorite character is Tom. Here’s a guy who has never had anyone until he meets Isabel. And she turns out to be right about him: There is a light inside of him. He is a loving husband and father. He keeps his promises to Isabel from the beginning. Even though he is faced with impossible decisions, he tries to do the right thing.

But maybe that is because I’m not a mother. I’ve never wanted to be a mother. I’ve never been pregnant. I’ve never miscarried. I’ve never had to deal with losing a child, whether before they were born or after raising them for years. My feelings for Isabel are more hypothetical since I can only imagine what she is going through.

I’m also a stickler for doing the moral and ethical thing. I’m not so much against them raising the baby as their own, but Isabel never even allowing herself to think the baby might have a mother. Grandparents. Other family who might love and suffer the loss. Family who might have been barely consoling themselves with the fact that while they lost a child, they at least get to raise their child’s child. As horrible as her loss was, she never stopped to think about the mother, causing the same pain to someone else – the very pain she was trying to avoid.

Of course, by this logic, my second favorite character should be Hannah as she is a very unfortunate, sympathetic character. She loses a great husband she loved very much, for whom she defied her father to marry. She also loses her daughter, and now she has to get her daughter to love her – but she thinks Isabel is her mother.

But because you start the movie loving Isabel and feeling for her due to her losses, by the time you have met Hannah, you were hoping they wouldn’t be found out. So I can’t really choose between the two women as characters.

So let’s look at all this from a fiction-writing point of view:

Conflict 1: If you were desperate to have a child, lost two before they were born, and a baby – with a dad man without any indication she had anyone else – appeared in front of you, would you report the incident or claim the baby as your own?

It seems simple enough. You can try again. You can try to adopt. But as Isabel points out, who would let them? They live isolated on an island where there are no schools, hospitals or other people.

Maybe they could move. Maybe Tom could find another job. Maybe they could adopt then. But Isabel isn’t exactly able to think logically. Her depression clouds her judgment, and her sadness clouds Tom’s.

It may not be what you would have done, but then again, you don’t live in the 1920s where options are limited. Maybe people who want to be parents or are mothers will feel Isabel’s dilemma more.  Even as someone who doesn’t wish to have kids now, I felt her pain. Solid acting, solid writing.

What would you do? Even if you ended up doing the right thing, wouldn’t you at least consider it? Because just as it was possible the baby would have close relatives, if not her mom, that would miss her, it was possible she would end up in an orphanage. Why let the kid go through all that when you could offer her a safe, loving home right here, right now?

I honestly don’t know what I would have done in the exact same situation. Would I have gone with Tom’s instinct? Or would my emotions get the better of me?

I can’t tell for sure, and that’s why it is such a great conflict. It is complicated, emotional, and the right thing may not be as obvious as it seems.

Conflict 2: You are Tom. You love your wife and your kid. You know your wife won’t give up her child. You now know there is a suffering mother out there because of your decisions and actions.  What would you do?

Would you leave the anonymous note? Would you try harder to convince your wife? Would you confess to the woman?

It is hard being Isabel, but it sure ain’t easy being Tom either.

Conflict 3: You are Tom. Would you leave the toy in Hannah’s mailbox?

Remember the toy I mentioned in the plot summary? After Tom puts it in the box, the police put up a notice with a reward. One of Tom and Isabel’s friends recognizes it, and then the police go to their island.

Did Tom know the toy would lead to them directly? Did he want to get caught to save Hannah from more pain? Or was it only subconscious?

Without the toy, they wouldn’t have been caught.

Conflict 4: Would you try to keep your kid away from them if you were Hannah, or would you want more details on why and how they got to keep the baby?

While what Tom and Isabel did was wrong, it isn’t the same as kidnapping a child. The baby came with a dead guy. They should have reported it, but had the baby indeed been an orphan, they would have just given a poor baby a fighting chance at a good, loving life.

It doesn’t condone their actions, but they make for some decent mitigating circumstances.

What Hannah knew was this: Tom made his wife keep the baby. It is his fault. At this point, she doesn’t know Tom isn’t a violent man. She doesn’t know if what he could have done to “force” his wife to do what he wanted. The child was unharmed, healthy, and wanted her “mom,” meaning Isabel. Keeping the baby completely away from her was not the right thing to do. Granted, potentially all mothers would have done the same and probably rightly so.

But the kid was miserable for a long time. And she ran away. Not even to Isabel. So she could have been seriously hurt or worse.

What would you have done if you were Hannah?

Conflict 5: You are Isabel. Would you be mad at your husband for “betraying” you and losing you your child, and potentially your only chance to have a child? Would you blame him and refuse to see him and let him stay in jail for something you MADE him do?

This is a tough one. For Isabel, it is the ultimate betrayal. I’m guessing she would have been less furious if he had an affair or killed someone. Not that Tom would do that, but you get my point.

If he hadn’t sent the note, or at least the toy, no one would have known. He went behind her back, but he had tried to persuade her before and failed.

He was torn between his love and conscience, and he didn’t enjoy hurting either woman.

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The movie had 5 major, extremely compelling conflicts. What is your favorite

in the film? Who is your favorite character and why? And what do you imagine you’d have done in similar circumstances? Let me know in the comments.


 

 

Filed Under: Fiction Writing, Story Conflicts Tagged With: alicia vikander, fiction writing, m. l. stedman, michael fassbender, rachel Weisz, the light between oceans, the light between oceans movie, the light between oceans movie review, the light between oceans story conflicts

The Best Free Resources for Writers to Find Markets to Pitch

Posted on August 9, 2018 Written by Pinar Tarhan

Or you can just look at a pink screen until you can think of markets to pitch. 🙂

Newer freelancers or those who are just thinking about venturing into freelance writing might be afraid they will run out of ideas to pitch. If that’s the case with you, you can always restock your idea well by brainstorming, and I’ve got the post to help you with that: Finding Article Ideas & Writing About Them: 30 Inspiration Tips for Writers

But for many of us, the problem is usually matching the idea to the right market. So I went ahead and wrote an article about this for WOW! Women on Writing: How to Find the Right Markets for Your Ideas,where I interviewed fellow experienced freelance writers and included their tips as well as my own. I also talked about how long you should keep pitching after your idea has been rejected. After all, two of my ideas found homes in about two years.

If you are however in a too-long-didn’t-read mode and want me to just give you some useful links, here they are:

–wheretopitch.com: Wheretopitch is an amazing free tool run by Susan Shain. You put in a keyword, and the website suggests where to pitch for you.

–whopayswriters.com Whopayswriters is another free website where writers list how much they were paid for an article, how long it took, and how easy/difficult it was. If you do a little digging, you will see many magazines you haven’t thought or known about. And you will have a great idea on what you will be dealing with when it comes to payment terms.

– Contently’s Rates Database: This database is much smaller than whopayswriters.com, but you can still go through the list to get ideas on where to pitch.

– *Your writer friends: When I’m stuck on where to write pitch a given piece or if I need more alternatives, I turn to my writer friends. I try to return the favor as much as I can. Writers are busy. We don’t all have assistants (though we really need one), so make sure you are not just receiving favors all the time. The goodwill will dry up. Don’t leave a bad impression.

If you are bad at coming up with places to pitch, you can offer to do other things for your friends such as proofreading or brainstorming ideas with them.

-Funds for Writers: Funds for Writers is an amazingly helpful resource website run by C. Hope Clark. An established writer herself, the website offers submission guidelines for markets, information on grants and contests as well as articles on all aspects of making money from your writing. I strongly recommend subscribing to the free newsletter.

–Writer’s Weekly: Writer’s Weekly is also a great free resource featuring market guidelines and articles. Both Funds for Writers and Writer’s Weekly are paid markets for writers, should you think you have an article idea for them. However, as with any publication, read their guidelines very carefully before pitching anything.

– Paid Publishing Guidebook by Freedom with Writing, as well as their newsletters. Freedom with Writing website offers a free book of markets to their newsletter subscribers. You also get markets suggested to you in the newsletters.

– Paidwrite.com. Kristy Rice’s wonderful website offers comprehensive lists of freelance writing markets. Make sure you hang out there a while to make the most of it.

– Jennifer Mattern’s All Freelance Writing website.In addition to answering most (if not all) of your questions about freelance writing , the website features a markets directory.

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And yes, you will encounter markets you have seen elsewhere, but the more you internalize them, the better. Nothing beats knowing at least five markets an idea might be a good fit for from the top of your head. It’s a wonderful time and sanity saver.

How about you? How do you find markets for your ideas?

Filed Under: Career Management for Writers, Paying Markets-Web and Print Tagged With: finding markets to pitch, finding paying writing markets, paying writing markets, pitching, pitching for writers, selling your writing, writing, writing markets

Launching A Travel Blog, Publishing A Novel, Project Overwhelm and Spring Fatigue

Posted on May 6, 2018 Written by Pinar Tarhan

Spring is here my fellow writing addicts! That means more sun, happiness and unfortunately extra tiredness and sleepiness. I’ve taken to eating more healthily, moving more and getting some herbal-based supplements that are supposed to boost the immune system.

In the meantime, I’ve tried to launch my travel blog and my novel as an e-book in addition to my other writerly duties such as pitching, writing, marketing, researching and so on.

I say “try to,” because launching a new blog has been a step well beyond my comfort zone. Don’t get me wrong; I love blogging. I love WordPress. I’ve been doing it for a long time now, and I believe I have gotten good at it.

But there is something stressful about starting over with a new blog, picking a theme – which I argue is one of the most frustrating things about blogging – and getting an audience to a blog you are proud to show people.

I’m still working on the design, but the first post is ready for consumption and sharing: How to Financially Survive a Trip to Oslo

And finding a theme that suits your needs, expectations and wants is no easy feat, as I wrote about it here. The fonts change, level of flexibility and options differ. Whether you are going for a free or premium theme, I wish you luck.

(This blog runs on the premium Studio Press’ Focus Pro – aff. link.)

But none of that compares to the challenge of publishing your novel. From deciding on whether you are going to work with individuals or a company, from deciding on whether you’ll format yourself or hand it over to a professional, from downright infuriating copyright laws to marketing, it is mission impossible for writers. Or it has been for this writer.

I decided to go with a self-publishing company that came highly recommended to me. And while they have had their pros, I continue to be disappointed by their after-publishing customer service. I talked about my self-publishing woes in this post.

If you try to buy my book but can’t, comment and I’ll try to find a link or a solution that works for your company.

My novel is currently only available digitally. You can check it out on Amazon (aff. link).

About the novel:

Making A Difference (M.A.D.) is a contemporary romantic comedy with some drama attached. It’s set in New York, and this is the plot summary without spoilers:

Everybody loves Jay. He’s that humanitarian PR guru who doesn’t live like the rich and runs a profitable company so that he’ll have more resources to help people. He defines himself through how much he and his company make a positive impact.

He’s engaged to a gorgeous CEO whose purse collection could feed the homeless in NYC, but he’s only human.

If anyone notices the irony, it’s Jay’s new partner Zoe. 10 years older than her, Jay is the reason she studied PR. So when Jay’s business partner/best friend takes a less pressuring position, she’s delighted to return to the firm she interned for.

But Jay and Zoe have a big secret: 5 years ago, they fell hard for each other. She was a student at NYU where Jay was a lecturer. To Jay, his legacy was everything, and he’d never risk his reputation by dating a student. Moreover, he’d die before he let Zoe ruin her career. She is furious he doesn’t take the risk for them. She leaves the country to get over him.

And now she’s happily coupled-up with lovely writer Colin.
Colin detests Jay, and he doesn’t even know the entire story. Zoe’s upset Colin’s turning into a whiny jerk, but he’s the first guy she has felt strongly for in a long time.

Jay can no longer dismiss his feelings as nostalgia, but Zoe’s still furious at him. And the last time he tried to fix things, she left the company and the country. And now that the stakes are even higher.

Will Jay be able to follow his heart even when improving the world seems easier?

 

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What have you been working on?

Filed Under: Blogging, Self-publishing, Writing Tagged With: blog launch, blogging, novel writing, self-publishing, studio press themes, wordpress, wordpress themes

Self-Publishing Your Novel with Mill City Press: Pros and Cons

Posted on May 1, 2018 Written by Pinar Tarhan

The cover!!! 🙂

My debut novel Making A Difference (amazon link) was finally on electronic bookshelves. But before I could hop to social media promoting the hell out of it, I encountered one weird problem after another.

I don’t know how many of these problems are due to Mill City Press. But I do expect them to help me fix it.

So far, with the weekend in between, customer service hasn’t exactly been fast, but if this week things don’t get done, I might officially regret my choice.

Here are some of the problems:

– It’s available on Amazon and Barnes & Noble, but only people from certain countries could manage to buy it so far.

I live in Turkey. The company is American, and my novel is in English, and I have friends and audience all over the world. So far, friends and family haven’t been able to buy the book. We tried Barnes and Noble, as we had the same problem. My customer rep hasn’t offered any solutions up to now.

Amazon suggested I changed my address to an American one. Which worked. I can buy my own book, yay? But this is obviously a temporary and narrow-reaching fix. If you have ideas, I’m happy to hear them.

What’s the point of releasing a digital book if it can’t easily be accessed worldwide?

– The customer service is slow to respond, and they want a phone call to go over the issues.

I get that my book is not their only problem, and I’m not their only customer. But my whole reason to involve a company was to be able to bypass technical issues and potential problems.

While anything can go wrong at any time in this world, I expect more from a company in this digital day and age. Them being available on weekdays on a normal 9-to-5 schedule wreaks havoc in my life because there is a considerable time difference between Florida and Istanbul. And making International phone calls are expensive, and apparently, they don’t do Skype.

Wait, what?

In 2018, after paying a hundred of bucks (just for the website, formatting/distributing the book has a different cost that I paid) I have to pay to fix problems?

Why isn’t there a way to chat with their authors online?

That doesn’t sit very well with me.

– They forgot to email me about some big news.

Writers tend to be obsessive about certain things, such as waiting to hear from their editor and checking their email about a million times a day. It is worse when you have an author account, and you are checking expectantly if they formatted your book so that you can more or less estimate your launch date.

Then you read that you will get an email notification with important updates so you relax (a bit) and go about your days. Then you don’t get an email notification when the book is ready and already on Amazon.

Ouch.

– My supposed $99/year (if I choose to renew it later) author site is a big nothing.

Imagine just an image picture of my book. But instead of the book, it just says image not available. You can’t click on it. There is no writing. You can’t find my name or my book among the collection when you search. And the most popular categories have got nothing to do with mine. Lovely.

Below is the screenshot of my author website.

Appealing, right? Notice how the promoted categories are Christian books? My book is a contemporary romantic comedy where characters are mostly liberal agnostics with some strong opinions. It’s PG-13, but still…Not the best marketing strategy on my end or theirs.

100 bucks might not sound like a lot of money to some, but I could get hosting, find a theme and make a website myself with that. Hell, I could just spend it on ads or improving my writer website and sell it here.

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After these major cons, let’s include some pros:

  • The formatting looked good.
  • The package was affordable. They are fast responding to your questions/concerns prior to making the investment.
  • They work with authors from all over the world.

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Do I recommend them? It’ll all depend on how/whether they fix the existing problems. Stay tuned. And while I can’t see my sales at the moment, you can always help me out by buying the book and leaving a review on Amazon or Goodreads.

Have you published your novel yourself? What problems have you encountered?

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Filed Under: Self-publishing, Writing Tagged With: making a difference, mill city press, my novel making a difference, publishing with mill city press, self-publishing, self-publishing problems

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